for An Unthinkable Dream9/15/2013 c1 
12MellowDragon
The story is good...but the setup is really hard to read. If you spaced the sentences out more it would make reading your story a lot easier.
12MellowDragonThe story is good...but the setup is really hard to read. If you spaced the sentences out more it would make reading your story a lot easier.