for Jaded Eyes of a Prodigy10/21 c20 Guest
This is a second read for me. I was enjoying myself then had a niggling feeling that i jated this story at the end. And so here i am, going straight to the last chapter to verify. Sadly i remember now how i hated the ending. I won t call it happy at all. In fact i think only voldy gets all he wants.. And there s even a dissapointing power shift in their relationship. I was gearing for a harry stronger than voldy in personality, and the aknowledgement that voldy like dumble had a part in causing harry 's miserable childhood.. But nope, voldy gets the boy at the end and it s creepy as he puts a young child in his lap.. Pfff this leaves a bad taste in my mouth after the build up for something glorious
This is a second read for me. I was enjoying myself then had a niggling feeling that i jated this story at the end. And so here i am, going straight to the last chapter to verify. Sadly i remember now how i hated the ending. I won t call it happy at all. In fact i think only voldy gets all he wants.. And there s even a dissapointing power shift in their relationship. I was gearing for a harry stronger than voldy in personality, and the aknowledgement that voldy like dumble had a part in causing harry 's miserable childhood.. But nope, voldy gets the boy at the end and it s creepy as he puts a young child in his lap.. Pfff this leaves a bad taste in my mouth after the build up for something glorious
10/6 c13 
31Sakura Lisel
Too bad Harry doesn’t know the main reason why he was left with the Dursleys. Like the fact that James and Lily were both in comas for 4-5 months after the attack, and after they finally woke up had immediately demanded his return to them, but DUMBLEDORE refused to tell them where he hid their oldest son. If they had fought harder to get him back he would have grown up with them if it wasn’t for Dumbledore instead of suffering at the Dursleys for years until he snapped and killed them.
31Sakura LiselToo bad Harry doesn’t know the main reason why he was left with the Dursleys. Like the fact that James and Lily were both in comas for 4-5 months after the attack, and after they finally woke up had immediately demanded his return to them, but DUMBLEDORE refused to tell them where he hid their oldest son. If they had fought harder to get him back he would have grown up with them if it wasn’t for Dumbledore instead of suffering at the Dursleys for years until he snapped and killed them.
9/10 c21 Tony Moonstone
The ending was very intense was quite hard to finish.
This story was one of the DARKEST Harry Potter stories that I've ever read.
I knew going in to reading this what I was probably going to see so I was prepared for it.
I really liked the name Tristan.
Though I'm rather shocked how you ended Clark Potter life I'm rather disappointed that you didn't do anything for Lilly and James.
I guess I'll have to see what you do in the sequel.
Onward I go.
Take care and be well!
The ending was very intense was quite hard to finish.
This story was one of the DARKEST Harry Potter stories that I've ever read.
I knew going in to reading this what I was probably going to see so I was prepared for it.
I really liked the name Tristan.
Though I'm rather shocked how you ended Clark Potter life I'm rather disappointed that you didn't do anything for Lilly and James.
I guess I'll have to see what you do in the sequel.
Onward I go.
Take care and be well!
9/10 c17 Tony Moonstone
Wow,
That was so incredibly dark.
Never seen Harry have so much dark and earth changing power before.
Wiping almost 90% of the muggle population from the earth, such dark power.
Wonder how the Wizardly World would cope with this entirely drastic change to the world.
All by a single dark powerful abused broken teenager.
Take care and be well!
Wow,
That was so incredibly dark.
Never seen Harry have so much dark and earth changing power before.
Wiping almost 90% of the muggle population from the earth, such dark power.
Wonder how the Wizardly World would cope with this entirely drastic change to the world.
All by a single dark powerful abused broken teenager.
Take care and be well!
9/8 c14 Tony Moonstone
I'm liking your change in story for the tournament.
Different creatures per champion and my jaw dropped when you had...Percy Weasley as a champion...Seriously?
I so can't wait to see how he does at the ball and the other tasks.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
I'm liking your change in story for the tournament.
Different creatures per champion and my jaw dropped when you had...Percy Weasley as a champion...Seriously?
I so can't wait to see how he does at the ball and the other tasks.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
9/8 c6 Tony Moonstone
It's rare to hear that Harry plays violin and it was a wonder to hear it in my imagination.
Thank you for surprising me.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
It's rare to hear that Harry plays violin and it was a wonder to hear it in my imagination.
Thank you for surprising me.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
9/7 c2 Tony Moonstone
So far the story is intriguing, its been awhile since I've read a Dark Harry Potter story.
He even murdered the Dursleys in quite a shocking way, that I've never seen.
So you have peaked my interest.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
So far the story is intriguing, its been awhile since I've read a Dark Harry Potter story.
He even murdered the Dursleys in quite a shocking way, that I've never seen.
So you have peaked my interest.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
7/17 c20 Guest
The story took a too dark a turn for my tastes, and the ending is just horrible.. The activation of the vampire's blood spoiled everything. I was enjoying just enough justified darkness before that fall into depravity. I wished for the satisfying vengence against dumble and a semblance of psychotic love with voldy aided by to the horcrux connection, but all went to shit. The elusion to pedo is just sickening, and gives the final proof that tristan and crew are despicable as much as the dursleys. Hurting children (sexually) , i hoped was the line not to cross.
The story took a too dark a turn for my tastes, and the ending is just horrible.. The activation of the vampire's blood spoiled everything. I was enjoying just enough justified darkness before that fall into depravity. I wished for the satisfying vengence against dumble and a semblance of psychotic love with voldy aided by to the horcrux connection, but all went to shit. The elusion to pedo is just sickening, and gives the final proof that tristan and crew are despicable as much as the dursleys. Hurting children (sexually) , i hoped was the line not to cross.
4/11 c1 Guest
You have a sick mind
Consult a psychiatrist
You have a sick mind
Consult a psychiatrist
3/26 c15 23Elaelle
Tu sais ce que j'aime dans ta fiction ? Le fait que Harry soit totalement dark et ne devie pas pour revenir comme un chien vers ses parents ou la lumière qui ne méritent que de mourir dans d'atroces souffrances et douleurs éternelles.
23ElaelleTu sais ce que j'aime dans ta fiction ? Le fait que Harry soit totalement dark et ne devie pas pour revenir comme un chien vers ses parents ou la lumière qui ne méritent que de mourir dans d'atroces souffrances et douleurs éternelles.
12/22/2023 c17 Daynieg
Dear Lord! That was crazy. Epic in a horrific sort of way. He actually bloody did it. And listening to the words as the music played was even worse? Better? I dunno. Mass genocide. Wow. Goodness. Oh my. I thought it was very well written.
Dear Lord! That was crazy. Epic in a horrific sort of way. He actually bloody did it. And listening to the words as the music played was even worse? Better? I dunno. Mass genocide. Wow. Goodness. Oh my. I thought it was very well written.
9/20/2023 c19 Reader
Hi there amazing gripping story but I couldn't help but giggle when you described McGonagall as a tough old bitty, you've used the Scottish word for breastfeeding or boob depending on context I think you meant buddy
Hi there amazing gripping story but I couldn't help but giggle when you described McGonagall as a tough old bitty, you've used the Scottish word for breastfeeding or boob depending on context I think you meant buddy