for Love Is In The Air!5/27/2008 c1 NoctisxNiveus
(C#1) nice story..I hate simca too she needs to go find a pole lolz (if you get it)
(C#1) nice story..I hate simca too she needs to go find a pole lolz (if you get it)
4/14/2008 c6 
1Astalavisbon
Finally! Finally, another *normal* fanfic has come! Bwah! There was 2 MUCH yaoi in air gear fanfic.. (yaoi fans dont hate me o
1AstalavisbonFinally! Finally, another *normal* fanfic has come! Bwah! There was 2 MUCH yaoi in air gear fanfic.. (yaoi fans dont hate me o
4/12/2008 c6 fujimura35namiko
too much hugs&kisses.. not my thing..anyway..u dgn _ _ _ _? ssah gler nk pcyew..
too much hugs&kisses.. not my thing..anyway..u dgn _ _ _ _? ssah gler nk pcyew..
4/8/2008 c1 Ikki JR
Great story very dramatic when is Agito and Mikan together
Great story very dramatic when is Agito and Mikan together
3/31/2008 c6 30Animediva943
let me just say i love air gear and this is a great story!
nami's my fav OC. and simca is a bitchXD i'd love to see anew chapter soon
30Animediva943let me just say i love air gear and this is a great story!
nami's my fav OC. and simca is a bitchXD i'd love to see anew chapter soon
3/6/2008 c5 fujimura35namiko
asal chapter ni cm pndek?jgn la stress sgat..nnti cpt tue tau.. hehe.. anyway.. keep up the good work..i'm waiting 4 ur next chappie..
asal chapter ni cm pndek?jgn la stress sgat..nnti cpt tue tau.. hehe.. anyway.. keep up the good work..i'm waiting 4 ur next chappie..
3/6/2008 c5 kuroneko
hurry up ! i wanna keep reading!gambateh!
hurry up ! i wanna keep reading!gambateh!
3/4/2008 c5 Mitsuko Soma
I'm really intersted about this AgitoxMikan pairing that you've set up, so I'll be reading on.Thumbs Up!
I'm really intersted about this AgitoxMikan pairing that you've set up, so I'll be reading on.Thumbs Up!
3/3/2008 c5 Crazy Oreo
Okay, you want me to tell you why this story makes my eyes bleed? First of all, your spelling and grammar is worse than a 11 year old at best. The Character's dialogues and personality are retarded and out of characters, meaning you butcher the character horribly. Simply put, this story isn't worth reading and definitely not worth reviewing. And I don't hate decently written stories, not a piece of garbage like this that I can write in 5 minute.
Do yourself and everyone else a favor, stop writing anything till you get a proper education in grammar and spelling.
-Love
Okay, you want me to tell you why this story makes my eyes bleed? First of all, your spelling and grammar is worse than a 11 year old at best. The Character's dialogues and personality are retarded and out of characters, meaning you butcher the character horribly. Simply put, this story isn't worth reading and definitely not worth reviewing. And I don't hate decently written stories, not a piece of garbage like this that I can write in 5 minute.
Do yourself and everyone else a favor, stop writing anything till you get a proper education in grammar and spelling.
-Love
3/2/2008 c5 23blackdeathmessenger
the ever clueless Kazu,though, Ikki is the real clueless one as far as the series goes.better written than the last chapter,but could've been longer.
23blackdeathmessengerthe ever clueless Kazu,though, Ikki is the real clueless one as far as the series goes.better written than the last chapter,but could've been longer.
3/1/2008 c5 Kjiverx
I'm getting really confused as to what's going on, but your writing is improving.
I'm getting really confused as to what's going on, but your writing is improving.
2/29/2008 c4 blackdeathmessenger
a rather confusing chapter.you should really rewrite it so it isn't so jumbled.
a rather confusing chapter.you should really rewrite it so it isn't so jumbled.
2/27/2008 c4 fujimura35namiko
I LLOVE ur story! Update soon... kalu ko xbz...
I LLOVE ur story! Update soon... kalu ko xbz...