for The Demon Assassin3/24/2008 c24 
2KuroKitt
I'm trying to keep a straight face... I think that was a great fitting end for this story, put me in a fit of laughter. I had to read over those few paragraphs again, where Sasuke ate the ring? -shakes head- I'd be depressed if I ate it, an engagement ring like that? This was a wonderful story and I can't wait your next story, at least you can finish yours. -laughs- I had a great pleasure reading this, and yes I noticed some mistakes with your writing, gramerical is all that it is so that usually goes unnoticed. Shoot even I can't type in perfect sentace structure. Its like telling a devoted Naruto fan to change the channel to watch Bleach... Maybe that wasn't the write analogy... Anyway, see you in your next story ja ne,
~Kitt
2KuroKittI'm trying to keep a straight face... I think that was a great fitting end for this story, put me in a fit of laughter. I had to read over those few paragraphs again, where Sasuke ate the ring? -shakes head- I'd be depressed if I ate it, an engagement ring like that? This was a wonderful story and I can't wait your next story, at least you can finish yours. -laughs- I had a great pleasure reading this, and yes I noticed some mistakes with your writing, gramerical is all that it is so that usually goes unnoticed. Shoot even I can't type in perfect sentace structure. Its like telling a devoted Naruto fan to change the channel to watch Bleach... Maybe that wasn't the write analogy... Anyway, see you in your next story ja ne,
~Kitt
3/24/2008 c24 22AsamiBlackfyre
hahahaha sasuke ATE the engagement ring? wow lol way to ruin the romantic moment sasuke lololol. cute ending i liked it :)
22AsamiBlackfyrehahahaha sasuke ATE the engagement ring? wow lol way to ruin the romantic moment sasuke lololol. cute ending i liked it :)
3/24/2008 c24 10Desperatembrace
omg, where in the world did you get the idea for the ring? lol. i loved it. way too cute.
10Desperatembraceomg, where in the world did you get the idea for the ring? lol. i loved it. way too cute.
3/24/2008 c24 5omer-yaoi-love
Oh my! I can't believe he swallowed the ring! XDD
I actually lold Oo
That was awesome X3 I liked the part after Sakura left :D
Do a sequel,do a sequel~ please~? *puppy dog face*
5omer-yaoi-loveOh my! I can't believe he swallowed the ring! XDD
I actually lold Oo
That was awesome X3 I liked the part after Sakura left :D
Do a sequel,do a sequel~ please~? *puppy dog face*
3/24/2008 c24 1arenha
AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH, such a funny chapter!~! But it was also really cute and sweet. ^^
So CUTE!~!
Can't wait for the next chapter!~!
1arenhaAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH, such a funny chapter!~! But it was also really cute and sweet. ^^
So CUTE!~!
Can't wait for the next chapter!~!
3/24/2008 c24 Lekila
oh god. That was hilarious! You wrote an awesome story.
-glomp-tackle-roll-nuzzle-repeat-
oh god. That was hilarious! You wrote an awesome story.
-glomp-tackle-roll-nuzzle-repeat-
3/24/2008 c24 6EmoLollipop
lol.
yes, sasuke does like Naruto's present X3 tee hee! lol
"I'm actually going to wear a ring that came from your ass..." XD that cracked me up. Xp lol
6EmoLollipoplol.
yes, sasuke does like Naruto's present X3 tee hee! lol
"I'm actually going to wear a ring that came from your ass..." XD that cracked me up. Xp lol