
3/22/2008 c23
9Runadaemon
I can't help but feel for Gaara...I hope he can find a good mate too. *Teary eyes* He just wants to be loved! Good chappie, a little confusing, but good. I was a little lost about what had happened, since Sasuke had been in the hospital in the last chapter, but it worked out fine. There were prolly mistakes like always, but not to the point where I noticed them, which is saying something, since I'm likely your chief complainer. Heh, so I'm going to Japan in two days, and won't be able to read your last chapter til I get back, or visit an internet cafe there...I might do it...heh. Good luck! I look forward to reading it!

I can't help but feel for Gaara...I hope he can find a good mate too. *Teary eyes* He just wants to be loved! Good chappie, a little confusing, but good. I was a little lost about what had happened, since Sasuke had been in the hospital in the last chapter, but it worked out fine. There were prolly mistakes like always, but not to the point where I noticed them, which is saying something, since I'm likely your chief complainer. Heh, so I'm going to Japan in two days, and won't be able to read your last chapter til I get back, or visit an internet cafe there...I might do it...heh. Good luck! I look forward to reading it!
3/21/2008 c23 Silver Night Fox
*verry happy yaoi fan girl squel (squel)*
I love this chapter, and I really can not wait for the next one! Is it really going to be the last one? *small sigh* oh well... All good things come to an end eventually. I have to say that I won't miss the wait between updates though, no matter how short they are.
It is also a good thing that there is lots of yaoi fanfiction on the net... because if there weren't... Well let's just say that my boyfriend would be one scared guy. *muwha ha ha ha*
It did feel the tinest bit rushed though, at the end most of all. I also think that Sakura and the civilians were out of the charchter you cast them in. Were they not supposed to be the 'Naruto Haters'?
*verry happy yaoi fan girl squel (squel)*
I love this chapter, and I really can not wait for the next one! Is it really going to be the last one? *small sigh* oh well... All good things come to an end eventually. I have to say that I won't miss the wait between updates though, no matter how short they are.
It is also a good thing that there is lots of yaoi fanfiction on the net... because if there weren't... Well let's just say that my boyfriend would be one scared guy. *muwha ha ha ha*
It did feel the tinest bit rushed though, at the end most of all. I also think that Sakura and the civilians were out of the charchter you cast them in. Were they not supposed to be the 'Naruto Haters'?
3/21/2008 c23 no name
woohoo, finally, but like a bit suprising that the villagers accepted,, lol...support anyway.
woohoo, finally, but like a bit suprising that the villagers accepted,, lol...support anyway.