for The Demon Assassin3/16/2008 c20 
2allanimehere
Thanks for the story. just some minor spelling (typing) and grammer errors, but i don't give f**k. keep on writing XD
here at least one review
2allanimehereThanks for the story. just some minor spelling (typing) and grammer errors, but i don't give f**k. keep on writing XD
here at least one review
3/16/2008 c20 25Applegirl3223
love your story so far, keep at it. my bucks didnt make the the Tournament but reading this made me feel better a little :( are you working on any more stories?
25Applegirl3223love your story so far, keep at it. my bucks didnt make the the Tournament but reading this made me feel better a little :( are you working on any more stories?
3/16/2008 c20 26IceCreamXD
Why tuesday? -cocks head to the side- Why not tomorrow? O_O Oh well, 2 days away, I hope! ^_^ Really interesting! Sasuke found out! This is turning out really good! ^_^
26IceCreamXDWhy tuesday? -cocks head to the side- Why not tomorrow? O_O Oh well, 2 days away, I hope! ^_^ Really interesting! Sasuke found out! This is turning out really good! ^_^
3/16/2008 c20 Silver Night Fox
Oh yes! It's really getting good now. When I saw that the next chapter was up I couldn't help but laugh evily and imediatly open the page and start reading... I'm not sure who was more freaked out- the dogs, the cats, or my parents!
Also... At the end I think that sauske was really ooc. A little too much. I don't think he would leave his team to worry, (at least not in this story) but he wouldn't shout it out. He would make some quiet little coment and give them orders... I think at least. But him shouting something like that- *shakes head* it's a little to much like the Naruto from early in the series. The goofey, show-offy kid, that had a special way with people.
Oh yes! It's really getting good now. When I saw that the next chapter was up I couldn't help but laugh evily and imediatly open the page and start reading... I'm not sure who was more freaked out- the dogs, the cats, or my parents!
Also... At the end I think that sauske was really ooc. A little too much. I don't think he would leave his team to worry, (at least not in this story) but he wouldn't shout it out. He would make some quiet little coment and give them orders... I think at least. But him shouting something like that- *shakes head* it's a little to much like the Naruto from early in the series. The goofey, show-offy kid, that had a special way with people.
3/16/2008 c20 5callietitan
yesyesyesyesyes, FINALLY sasuke gets a clue. update again asap, i've been waiting for this part!
5callietitanyesyesyesyesyes, FINALLY sasuke gets a clue. update again asap, i've been waiting for this part!
3/16/2008 c20 27Mystik Genie
*squeal* i don't think i can handle the suspense! update now!
i think Sasuke should Naru a huge kiss, lol. think of it as battle distraction, lol
27Mystik Genie*squeal* i don't think i can handle the suspense! update now!
i think Sasuke should Naru a huge kiss, lol. think of it as battle distraction, lol
3/16/2008 c20 6EmoLollipop
awesome!^^ i love this story! sasuke figured it out. took him long enough lol
6EmoLollipopawesome!^^ i love this story! sasuke figured it out. took him long enough lol
3/16/2008 c20 9Yumekui7
aww! ended it rite at teh important part ! o well update soon! plz and thanx! ^.^
9Yumekui7aww! ended it rite at teh important part ! o well update soon! plz and thanx! ^.^
3/16/2008 c20 EasyasA.B.C
Sasuke was right assuming he was the olny one that didn't figure out Yasuo was Naruto. How blind can a man be! Anyways I really like the story and the role Sakura plays in it can't wait to see more!
~Danielle
Sasuke was right assuming he was the olny one that didn't figure out Yasuo was Naruto. How blind can a man be! Anyways I really like the story and the role Sakura plays in it can't wait to see more!
~Danielle
3/16/2008 c20 1arenha
Aw, Sasuke is always the confused on. A dense Sasuke is so cute. AHAHAHHAHAHAHA. Niway, I wonder what Sasuke will do now. How will the battle go? Will Yasuo notice that Sasuke is acting strangely? AH!~! I need to KNOW!~!
Hopefully it's updated tomorrow, I NEED to find out!~!
1arenhaAw, Sasuke is always the confused on. A dense Sasuke is so cute. AHAHAHHAHAHAHA. Niway, I wonder what Sasuke will do now. How will the battle go? Will Yasuo notice that Sasuke is acting strangely? AH!~! I need to KNOW!~!
Hopefully it's updated tomorrow, I NEED to find out!~!
3/16/2008 c20 10Desperatembrace
Haha, poor Sasuke feels stupid. 'Curse bad timing' lol. Can't wait to see how you get them to confront eachother!
10DesperatembraceHaha, poor Sasuke feels stupid. 'Curse bad timing' lol. Can't wait to see how you get them to confront eachother!