for The Demon Assassin6/4/2008 c24 
1Tazered
Bwhahahaha, if I had found this story earlier, I would have been reviewing like crazy. I loved it, was great ;3
I usually don't like Uke!Sasuke but he was just awesome in this xD
I like the whole story a lot, and I'll be looking into your other stories :3
I loved the flashbacks in these past three chapters with the time machine (I actually sat up straight and tried to find a seat belt. SH! XD!)
I have no idea what I'd do if I swallowed my engagement ring hahaha! Brilliant :D
Keep it up!
1TazeredBwhahahaha, if I had found this story earlier, I would have been reviewing like crazy. I loved it, was great ;3
I usually don't like Uke!Sasuke but he was just awesome in this xD
I like the whole story a lot, and I'll be looking into your other stories :3
I loved the flashbacks in these past three chapters with the time machine (I actually sat up straight and tried to find a seat belt. SH! XD!)
I have no idea what I'd do if I swallowed my engagement ring hahaha! Brilliant :D
Keep it up!
4/16/2008 c24 16Crazy PurpleSage
Yatta! That was such an awesome story. And I loved the funny ending too! Ahh, so great! I really like how you lengthened and gave more depth than the original story. I enjoyed reading this immensely! Great job, and it just kept getting better and better as the chapters went on. Nice work!
=D
16Crazy PurpleSageYatta! That was such an awesome story. And I loved the funny ending too! Ahh, so great! I really like how you lengthened and gave more depth than the original story. I enjoyed reading this immensely! Great job, and it just kept getting better and better as the chapters went on. Nice work!
=D
4/13/2008 c1 11demonicange1
Ok, before I start stroking your ego with praise, I have to glare and complain a bit. GET. A. BETA! You have so many SIMPLE spelling errors that it distracts from the plot. They would be EASY to take out if you used SPELLCHECK! secondly, "He thought of a couple of words, that my fingers refuse to type." Don't insert yourself as an author in at random times, as it disrupts the flow of the writing. Just say that the words or whatever are inappropriate for children's ears or something.(but more creative than that, ne?)
Ok! Besides that! I REALLY love your plot line and I burst out laughing several times! ^^ Like when Naruto's like: your orange kyuubi! and then they had a mini arguement! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! and then Naruto's new cloths sound great! and I loved Naruto's note. That was way more origional than the usual "goodbye everyone who loves me a.k.a tsunade and Iruka-sensei! I'm going off to be emo for a bit and don't blame the villagers! (eventhough it is entirely their fault!)". I liked the bit of fuck-the-world that Naruto put in there. Very nice. :)
11demonicange1Ok, before I start stroking your ego with praise, I have to glare and complain a bit. GET. A. BETA! You have so many SIMPLE spelling errors that it distracts from the plot. They would be EASY to take out if you used SPELLCHECK! secondly, "He thought of a couple of words, that my fingers refuse to type." Don't insert yourself as an author in at random times, as it disrupts the flow of the writing. Just say that the words or whatever are inappropriate for children's ears or something.(but more creative than that, ne?)
Ok! Besides that! I REALLY love your plot line and I burst out laughing several times! ^^ Like when Naruto's like: your orange kyuubi! and then they had a mini arguement! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! and then Naruto's new cloths sound great! and I loved Naruto's note. That was way more origional than the usual "goodbye everyone who loves me a.k.a tsunade and Iruka-sensei! I'm going off to be emo for a bit and don't blame the villagers! (eventhough it is entirely their fault!)". I liked the bit of fuck-the-world that Naruto put in there. Very nice. :)
4/7/2008 c24 9Runadaemon
heheh. ring from ass...he he he. That was very funny. I can tell you worked really hard on this chapter, it really shows. There was a lot of care in the wording and such. Thanks for the great story!
9Runadaemonheheh. ring from ass...he he he. That was very funny. I can tell you worked really hard on this chapter, it really shows. There was a lot of care in the wording and such. Thanks for the great story!
4/3/2008 c24 1ElysiumC
HAHAHAHHA That was the best ending EVER! I think Sasuke was a lil bit OC with the lovey dovey stuff but it was really good still. And the whole “I’m actually going to wear a ring that came from your ass…” from Naruto was totally him lol I LOVED it and i hope the next one is as good ad this one :D
1ElysiumCHAHAHAHHA That was the best ending EVER! I think Sasuke was a lil bit OC with the lovey dovey stuff but it was really good still. And the whole “I’m actually going to wear a ring that came from your ass…” from Naruto was totally him lol I LOVED it and i hope the next one is as good ad this one :D
4/2/2008 c24 noname00
i can't stop laughing from naruto's last line XD
your fic was of course funny and i just couldn't help but like it^^
i can't stop laughing from naruto's last line XD
your fic was of course funny and i just couldn't help but like it^^
3/31/2008 c24 karleta-chan
you've all the ingredients for a awesome story ! Congratulations !
It's all i have to say, you made me speechless.
you've all the ingredients for a awesome story ! Congratulations !
It's all i have to say, you made me speechless.
3/29/2008 c24 SyaoranDazzleChic1
Great story, loved it a lot. It was cute, sad, entertaining, and exciting, all things a good story should be. :-)
Great story, loved it a lot. It was cute, sad, entertaining, and exciting, all things a good story should be. :-)
3/27/2008 c24 En Taiho
Yay, a very good fic!
Usually it takes me a long time to read a fic. But I read yours really quickly, even though it has 24 chapters! It's good! ^^
I luv it when Naruto's strong and to top it all, it's NaruSasu. Yay! ^_^
Yay, a very good fic!
Usually it takes me a long time to read a fic. But I read yours really quickly, even though it has 24 chapters! It's good! ^^
I luv it when Naruto's strong and to top it all, it's NaruSasu. Yay! ^_^
3/27/2008 c24 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten
Oh Gods... I loved this story...
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Oh Gods... I loved this story...
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Tenshi no Yoko,
Tenshi Mei,
Mei and Shinsei -