for The Killing Kidnapper3/11/2008 c4 
2ladybrin
this is good- are you gonna finsih- i hope you will = i want to know what happens-
2ladybrinthis is good- are you gonna finsih- i hope you will = i want to know what happens-
2/19/2008 c3 18Rory J. Evans
Cool story. It has an interesting beginning. I just wish that you would develop it a bit more and make the chapters more substantial. You should definitely continue it though.
18Rory J. EvansCool story. It has an interesting beginning. I just wish that you would develop it a bit more and make the chapters more substantial. You should definitely continue it though.
2/14/2008 c3 2ladybrin
well i hope you will post soon- we need to know what is going on- keep writing and i love LM fics
2ladybrinwell i hope you will post soon- we need to know what is going on- keep writing and i love LM fics
1/26/2008 c3 45ALEO
A bit hard to read, some more description would be nice. I'm interested in finding out why this bloke would kidnap Megan and how this relates to the story of his mother almost running Megan over all those years ago and how it also relates to his mother being kidnapped and murdered.
45ALEOA bit hard to read, some more description would be nice. I'm interested in finding out why this bloke would kidnap Megan and how this relates to the story of his mother almost running Megan over all those years ago and how it also relates to his mother being kidnapped and murdered.