
1/17/2010 c19 emily
O i love your twist on twilight :) what'll make it even better is a sequel ;) x
O i love your twist on twilight :) what'll make it even better is a sequel ;) x
1/12/2010 c19 Soph
yeah, it's alright
yeah, it's alright
11/17/2009 c3
3NeRdYcHiCk13
for some weird reason i found this chapter kinda funny but like i said 'random reason' but i loved the chappy.

for some weird reason i found this chapter kinda funny but like i said 'random reason' but i loved the chappy.
8/28/2009 c13 nesha715
I liked some of the parts in this chapter not all of them
I didnt like how when They got to Edwards house it was like the same as the book.
I just think it should have been different but I loved it anyway
I liked some of the parts in this chapter not all of them
I didnt like how when They got to Edwards house it was like the same as the book.
I just think it should have been different but I loved it anyway
8/25/2009 c19 blondebeautiful
u r suuch a fantastic writer! this is so cool. its really similar to the original but the little changes are really good. keep writing.
lots of luck in the future
blonde&beautiful
u r suuch a fantastic writer! this is so cool. its really similar to the original but the little changes are really good. keep writing.
lots of luck in the future
blonde&beautiful