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7/12/2013 c1 CAC
Great to see that Jim is interrupting the dynasty o deadbeat daddies!
7/30/2010 c1 14FallingStar95
Awwwww! Sooo cute! Jim's absolutely adorable as a daddy! :)
6/12/2010 c1 star145
I liked it. You should write a prequel about how Jim and Emma met. It is just a suggestion though.
12/31/2009 c1 32The Alleycat Ulan
Cute idea and believable scenario.

Maybe a little bit more elaboration on some details here and there to flesh it out would help it improve a little. Great work though!

haha and I don't blame you for using your own name for Jim's wife, I would've done the same thing ;P)
1/21/2009 c1 6WhimsicalBreeze3897
this was an amazing story. bravo Emma!

BTW I'm not a stalker, you said your name was Emma in your a/n at the end of the story so... OK just keep writing treasure planet Jim thingy s because yours are awesome.
3/5/2008 c1 4Diablo Chica
Expand! Throw in details of the hospital, the characters, and their emotions. You have the bones of a pretty good story here. Breathe some life into it.

Also, remember to make a new paragraph when people speak.

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