for The Many Adventures of Carlisle's Desk11/1/2008 c2 duskember19
though I think ch. 1 was better this chapter was still good to . keep on writing
though I think ch. 1 was better this chapter was still good to . keep on writing
10/12/2008 c2 nomoreupdates2
Aw such a funny story. Some of the characters are ooc (like esme) but that is what makes it so funny. I laughed pretty hard in the first chapter with Emmett and his images of Rosalie. HAHA
Please update soon!
Aw such a funny story. Some of the characters are ooc (like esme) but that is what makes it so funny. I laughed pretty hard in the first chapter with Emmett and his images of Rosalie. HAHA
Please update soon!
6/23/2008 c2 Great one939
This story is so funny! Why haven't you put more up? I LOVED IT!
C - YA LATER ALLIGATOR!
This story is so funny! Why haven't you put more up? I LOVED IT!
C - YA LATER ALLIGATOR!
5/16/2008 c2 
3murtaghismyhottie
Hehe! I LOVE IT! Poor Carlise's desk. I feel bad for it. :S It would be just so easy to break the poor thing... And, sometimes, satisfying, depending on the day. ^^ And I loved the whole Jacob saying that they don't deliver. "It's not Bella, it's Digorno's". (sp?) ^^
3murtaghismyhottieHehe! I LOVE IT! Poor Carlise's desk. I feel bad for it. :S It would be just so easy to break the poor thing... And, sometimes, satisfying, depending on the day. ^^ And I loved the whole Jacob saying that they don't deliver. "It's not Bella, it's Digorno's". (sp?) ^^
3/26/2008 c2 1Forgotten Ink
LOL! Poor Carlisle! It would be funny if Jacob or Bella Broke it and Esme said "YOUR GROUNDED!" Even though they don't live there. And how is Bella going to break the desk?
1Forgotten InkLOL! Poor Carlisle! It would be funny if Jacob or Bella Broke it and Esme said "YOUR GROUNDED!" Even though they don't live there. And how is Bella going to break the desk?
2/18/2008 c2 16Kasey Elizabeth
Wow, good idea, but can you put a bit more Carlisle into it? Like how he feels each time his desk gets broken? And once again, Edward's middle name is spelt M-A-S-E-N. MASEN. M-A-S-E-N. MASEN!
16Kasey ElizabethWow, good idea, but can you put a bit more Carlisle into it? Like how he feels each time his desk gets broken? And once again, Edward's middle name is spelt M-A-S-E-N. MASEN. M-A-S-E-N. MASEN!
1/22/2008 c2 55intastella burst
I love this story-keep writing! One little thing: you seem to use the word "screamed" a lot; maybe you could try to mix that up a little. Awesome job, though!
55intastella burstI love this story-keep writing! One little thing: you seem to use the word "screamed" a lot; maybe you could try to mix that up a little. Awesome job, though!