for Stray Thoughts7/28/2009 c1 
14Elanthra
This is good... I mean really good... this is exactly how Brendan would have reacted to the news of Freya... I love the dropping the pizza from his mouth with the surprise... and the pink shirt... gee, thanks mom. Lovely details.
And it'd be good, if you were ever to write more TC...
14ElanthraThis is good... I mean really good... this is exactly how Brendan would have reacted to the news of Freya... I love the dropping the pizza from his mouth with the surprise... and the pink shirt... gee, thanks mom. Lovely details.
And it'd be good, if you were ever to write more TC...
6/19/2008 c1 7godsdaughter77
I enjoyed this story and thought it was well written. Good job! Thanks for sharing it.
7godsdaughter77I enjoyed this story and thought it was well written. Good job! Thanks for sharing it.
1/24/2008 c1 22katstales
Very nice start. :) You have his thoughts down very well, sounds very much like him. You need to write more now. *g*
22katstalesVery nice start. :) You have his thoughts down very well, sounds very much like him. You need to write more now. *g*
1/24/2008 c1 Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar
Aw, I adore! :) Nicely done, m'dear and I could totally see him doing the little stuff you had him doing. :) *claps*
Aw, I adore! :) Nicely done, m'dear and I could totally see him doing the little stuff you had him doing. :) *claps*
1/19/2008 c1 Karri-1671
:claps: Fantastic! You write Brendan well! :D (So well that you should write Brendan more often. ;)) Poor guy! Sounds like he's having a Monday. :pats him:
:claps: Fantastic! You write Brendan well! :D (So well that you should write Brendan more often. ;)) Poor guy! Sounds like he's having a Monday. :pats him: