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8/4/2009 c2 11XxTaintedxDaggerxX
Hope you continue this story! I dont care if its either Minato or Itachi, I'm just so curious as to what will happen next. Can't wait to read more of your work!~
7/28/2009 c2 4BlackWitchesCat
i dont think it

should be a yaoi

or a fem-naru.

dont get me wrong

i like yaoi too

its just doesnt seem

good for this story.

you also already made

naruto a son so fem-naru

would only confuse the

readers. minato(sorry but

minato is the 4ths name look

it up on onemanga)should stay

single. if your doing a yaoi

with iruka he should be with

kakashi(but please dont)like

i said before i have no problem

with yaoi i just dont think it

should be in this story. my fav

pairing is naruhina. but if you

do, do a pairing dont rush into it

that just kills the story altogether.
5/23/2009 c2 Chilassa
i really want to know what happens next!

It's sad that you havn't update for so long. really really sad...
4/26/2009 c2 11BlackRoseOfTheGrave
YAY! This is a mixture of cute and utterly depressing! For a pairing I guess I would say either Minato (Arashi isn't his name...) and Naruto or Naruto and Kiba! CUTE! Think about it this way, Kiba is part dog and Naruto is somewhat foxy, so they are a match made in heaven/hell! For a side pairing I love the idea of Minato/Iruka! ADORABLE TO THE MAX! Though I want a MinatoxNaruto more... so I would say go with Iruka/Kakashi or Iruka Shizune and Tsunadex Pervey Hermit!
3/18/2009 c2 2XXnarutoyaoiXX
minato! and this story is SO f*ing AWESOME!
1/24/2009 c2 DeSyvPlager
What about Male-Kyuubi/Naruto? I'd like to see that one, also I think it'd explain the red eyes you mentioned earlier ^_^ If you're against m-Kyuubi I would say Itachi, or male Haru, whatever rides your bote ^_^ An interesting side pairing would be Minato/Iruka, then Iruka could be his "mother" instead of father ^_^ Good job so far, I look forward to the update.

/DSP
1/14/2009 c2 14hanakisa
omg pleaase update soon! i love this i want it to be itanaru!
1/8/2009 c2 6Griffin D. Sage
A very good story. Naruto is so cute with his little fox ears! He will make it back to Konoha, right?

Oh, and I vote for Naruto/FemKyubi
1/3/2009 c2 ArtemisEcho86
I think it's kind of interesting, But I don't think I like the idea of Naruto being made a slave. But all in all, the story is good and I hope to see the next Chapter soon :D :D

~VIoletclaw (Please call me Violet)
10/12/2008 c2 Allie-grrl4
update soon

minato/arashi
10/4/2008 c2 6Polish
-Climbs up to the top of the Hokage mountain-

Up!1-jumpsoff and falls- Date!1

please? update! This is really good! I like it alot! Please?
8/14/2008 c2 Silvermane1
please update

Minato/Iruka

Jiraiya/Tsunade

Sasuke/naruto
8/8/2008 c1 1red-crecent-moon
Love the story whens the next chapter
7/27/2008 c1 UnwantedMisery3
Kakanaru or minato and naruto. either would be good.
7/27/2008 c1 10SweetTemptation2
For the pairing hmm... i pick either kakashinaruto or Minatonaruto. One of those would be good! :D
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