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6/24/2008 c1 LaMinte
Those last few sentences were great. Good description, and a sense of depth. It was like having a clear visual of what that person saw of the other. ^_^
1/21/2008 c1 3casui
Very nice. I didn't like the fact that the sentences were all smashed together into two paragraphs (and the little ending line). I liked how poetic you were when describing Sasuke as Naruto. I love the ending line, it went with the title, it rhymed a bit, and it held the essence of the story. Bravo.

~Ja, casui
1/20/2008 c1 3pavement-greengrass
Wow...

Wow.

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