for Evermore10/5/2012 c1 
13mistrali
This is sweet and emotional. I liked the atmosphere of complete trust & acceptance between them, no judgement, no questions asked. I haven't read all the books, so I've no idea how close they all are in canon, but you've managed to create a loving, warm feeling here.
13mistraliThis is sweet and emotional. I liked the atmosphere of complete trust & acceptance between them, no judgement, no questions asked. I haven't read all the books, so I've no idea how close they all are in canon, but you've managed to create a loving, warm feeling here.
7/21/2009 c1 19blindkitten
Wow... That's... different. Different in a very good way, but it's different. I liked it. A lot. It was great. Original. Soft, I suppose. Touching.
19blindkittenWow... That's... different. Different in a very good way, but it's different. I liked it. A lot. It was great. Original. Soft, I suppose. Touching.
2/2/2009 c1 xaphanea
Lovely!
Lovely!
11/14/2008 c1 70Tashilovet
I like it. If Everworld was just a bit more um...rated r, I think this could be an outcome. Wonderful job writing it. Not too dirty but just enough to get the point across.
70TashilovetI like it. If Everworld was just a bit more um...rated r, I think this could be an outcome. Wonderful job writing it. Not too dirty but just enough to get the point across.
9/10/2008 c1 3Gleeful Melancholy
I liked this a lot...in Everworld it seems like they needed more than just themselves or one other person to lean on, and it actually seems fitting that they all support each other equally. I like how April was last and you addressed her qualms about her faith and principles. Actually, thinking back on all of them, they were all very IC: Chris with his stubborn denial at first, Jalil with his respect of David's courtesy towards him (with the..OCD thing, can't really remember the books now) and David. I liked this a lot!
3Gleeful MelancholyI liked this a lot...in Everworld it seems like they needed more than just themselves or one other person to lean on, and it actually seems fitting that they all support each other equally. I like how April was last and you addressed her qualms about her faith and principles. Actually, thinking back on all of them, they were all very IC: Chris with his stubborn denial at first, Jalil with his respect of David's courtesy towards him (with the..OCD thing, can't really remember the books now) and David. I liked this a lot!
7/28/2008 c1 36LittleLinor
Oh heck I really liked this. It's been ages since I read everworld, but this seems IC to me, in the "it gives the right feeling" way, and it makes me want to read the books again.
So yay for you!
I'm faving this.
36LittleLinorOh heck I really liked this. It's been ages since I read everworld, but this seems IC to me, in the "it gives the right feeling" way, and it makes me want to read the books again.
So yay for you!
I'm faving this.
5/5/2008 c1 Wraith
This is quite a beautiful story. Usually I'm not a fan of non-canon pairings, but this was well carried off and didn't bother me in the slightest. You captured the essence of the different characters well.
I'm sorry I don't have any useful criticism for you (I don't give the non-useful kind because I try not to be a dork). Its hard to edit a conceptual piece. I'm also a sucker for shorts like this.
This is quite a beautiful story. Usually I'm not a fan of non-canon pairings, but this was well carried off and didn't bother me in the slightest. You captured the essence of the different characters well.
I'm sorry I don't have any useful criticism for you (I don't give the non-useful kind because I try not to be a dork). Its hard to edit a conceptual piece. I'm also a sucker for shorts like this.
1/25/2008 c1 14Ryuichi-Tohma
Aww...that made me really happy Katy. ...I really liked it. I think I could even understand who the characters were the way you wrote it.
I loved it and it made me feel good inside. Very awesome. Bravo. :3
14Ryuichi-TohmaAww...that made me really happy Katy. ...I really liked it. I think I could even understand who the characters were the way you wrote it.
I loved it and it made me feel good inside. Very awesome. Bravo. :3
1/21/2008 c1 7BlackRosePoet
I like how you really go for the themes of acceptance and support. This could have been a terrible or porn-y fic but now its just sweet. Saddly I don't remember the canon very well, but I likies muchly.
7BlackRosePoetI like how you really go for the themes of acceptance and support. This could have been a terrible or porn-y fic but now its just sweet. Saddly I don't remember the canon very well, but I likies muchly.