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11/13/2008 c5 shatteredxcrystals
luv it! :)
11/9/2008 c5 AKA.Girl
I really really really like this story! it's really nice!..

fuyumi reminds a bit of ryoma.. -grins- i am really curious about her past though.. -ponders-

Anyways I really really like this story..

I can’t wait for the next chapter!
10/21/2008 c5 2youare-who-youare
nice =p hahas
10/20/2008 c5 21Dragon Reverb
nice, update soon!
9/27/2008 c1 2midori ringo-chyaan
wasn't it oranges instead of peaches?
9/19/2008 c4 offthewebby
keep it up!
4/15/2008 c4 2AppleShortCake
CHEESE! yay! please finish! :D LOL its great!

also

LOL

honey-sempai?

lol

natsume? Noda?

i really do love ouran and Gakuen Alice.

this means u do too,rite?
4/11/2008 c4 21Dragon Reverb
is there more?
3/2/2008 c3 24Ivy.Lunar.Reid
question. If honey is 17, like ryoga, and natsume is 10, then is natsume honey's half brother? you wrote that her father died in a plane crash when she was 5. honey is now 17 making it 12 years since her father's death. If natsume is honey's brother by both mother and father, then how come he's not 12 or 13. but otherwise, this is not bad. i like where the story's going. keep going.
2/21/2008 c4 19fhclause
Hey ya! This is a good OC story! God, how hard it is to find a good RyogaxOC story! Hope for a new chappie!
1/28/2008 c4 6cityangelz
Hi!

I normally don't read OC stories but I thought I'd give yours a try and I'm pretty hooked. Just a reminder though. Don't try to make Fuyumi too perfect coz that's unrealistic and you'll fall down the mary-sue trap.

Interested to see more!

cheers!
1/24/2008 c4 BloodNinja555
cool. i saw ryoga confess to her. looking forward to next chapter.
1/23/2008 c2 BloodNinja555
good so far. i hope you contune. there isnt much on ryoga out there.
1/21/2008 c1 xxSpoolyxx
Ha awsome first chapter! Cant wait until the OC comes in.
1/21/2008 c1 14Haru Cherry
It looks good so far;D

Update soon!

!Haru Cherry!
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