
3/10/2019 c35
44Puella Pulchra
Just thought I would let you know. Your chapter looks like this :p class"MsoNormal" style"tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 369.0pt;"span style"mso-tab-count: 1;" /spanShe'd been right to investigate. A minute more and she'd have come to aid a corpse. Those eyes…just before the light broke she caught them, dripping the color of blood and murder. In that moment, this all became very, very real. The kind of real that builds like a block of ice downslope, shattering when it strikes the ground below. And like ice, something cold and equally reflective glinted in the back of her mind. em style"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"I know those eyes/em./p
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Just thought I would let you know. Your chapter looks like this :p class"MsoNormal" style"tab-stops: .5in 1.0in 1.5in 2.0in 2.5in 3.0in 3.5in 4.0in 4.5in 369.0pt;"span style"mso-tab-count: 1;" /spanShe'd been right to investigate. A minute more and she'd have come to aid a corpse. Those eyes…just before the light broke she caught them, dripping the color of blood and murder. In that moment, this all became very, very real. The kind of real that builds like a block of ice downslope, shattering when it strikes the ground below. And like ice, something cold and equally reflective glinted in the back of her mind. em style"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"I know those eyes/em./p
I think something went wrong when you cut and pasted/downloaded it on to
3/3/2019 c34 Non C. Anon
Holy crap you're back! I had long-since given up hope of ever seeing this continued. Thank you. I have to run to work soon. But, I'll be back to actually read the chapter later.
Holy crap you're back! I had long-since given up hope of ever seeing this continued. Thank you. I have to run to work soon. But, I'll be back to actually read the chapter later.
2/14/2019 c33 Guest
It's been over a decade since you last updated. I really enjoyed this fanfiction. It's a shame that you stopped continuing it. I was looking fowards to Jazz and Dan meeting and Danny seeing his sister as a ghost. Hopefully, and someday, you'll remember this fanfiction and begin updating. Once again, I really enjoyed it. Ciao.
It's been over a decade since you last updated. I really enjoyed this fanfiction. It's a shame that you stopped continuing it. I was looking fowards to Jazz and Dan meeting and Danny seeing his sister as a ghost. Hopefully, and someday, you'll remember this fanfiction and begin updating. Once again, I really enjoyed it. Ciao.
6/25/2014 c32
2KuletXCore
We have DROPPED the bass, ladies and gentlemen.
it was fun while it lasted.

We have DROPPED the bass, ladies and gentlemen.
it was fun while it lasted.
6/24/2014 c13 KuletXCore
her hair. It should have been blue.
because INVERTS.
anyway, nice fic.
FAVED.
her hair. It should have been blue.
because INVERTS.
anyway, nice fic.
FAVED.
6/5/2011 c33
15ShadowYashi
Oh my goodness no! It can't just stop here! Not here! Jazz didn't even get to fight Dan yet and Danny's about to reveal what happened! But it's been 3 years since you've updated this, you've probably fallen out of the DP fandom or something D: its such a shame, this fic is sooooooo good. If you do ever decide to pick it up, I'll definitely be waiting for it eagerly.

Oh my goodness no! It can't just stop here! Not here! Jazz didn't even get to fight Dan yet and Danny's about to reveal what happened! But it's been 3 years since you've updated this, you've probably fallen out of the DP fandom or something D: its such a shame, this fic is sooooooo good. If you do ever decide to pick it up, I'll definitely be waiting for it eagerly.
2/8/2009 c13
7go-sullivan
Man, Jazz should have worn a suit like Maddie's. And then she could play at being Racer X and all stealth like. Since that would have been cool and fun.

Man, Jazz should have worn a suit like Maddie's. And then she could play at being Racer X and all stealth like. Since that would have been cool and fun.
10/14/2008 c32
6Amazing Bluie
Now, just out of curiosity, is this going to be like most Danny Phantom fanfiction and have everyone calling Danny's future self Dan? Because, he was never called Dan in TUE, that's just the official fan name for him. Anyways, just thought I'd ask.

Now, just out of curiosity, is this going to be like most Danny Phantom fanfiction and have everyone calling Danny's future self Dan? Because, he was never called Dan in TUE, that's just the official fan name for him. Anyways, just thought I'd ask.
10/9/2008 c31 Half-Ghost
Wow, this is one good story! It took me a few hours to read it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
Wow, this is one good story! It took me a few hours to read it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.