for Will's Rumminations5/26/2008 c1 Lily
I thought it was brilliantly hopeful and romantic. The case for Will and Djaq was very compelling and touching. It was well written. I'm not a literary critic, but it is a story that kept my wrapt attention; and isn't that was a writer hopes for?
I thought it was brilliantly hopeful and romantic. The case for Will and Djaq was very compelling and touching. It was well written. I'm not a literary critic, but it is a story that kept my wrapt attention; and isn't that was a writer hopes for?
5/23/2008 c1 Janiqua
Wow. I don't think Allan has it in him to kill Will, but I totally understand why Will would have nightmares about it, and it's just so intense.
Wow. I don't think Allan has it in him to kill Will, but I totally understand why Will would have nightmares about it, and it's just so intense.
1/27/2008 c1 
4ChiaroDiLuna
Lovely. Will's nightmares were a good touch - I can definitely believe that he would suffer from nightmares all the time.
4ChiaroDiLunaLovely. Will's nightmares were a good touch - I can definitely believe that he would suffer from nightmares all the time.
1/27/2008 c1 343RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley
aw so sweet. if you want any ideas check out robins revenge army. but i'm warning you, you might goi nsane
343RicardianScholar Clark-Weasleyaw so sweet. if you want any ideas check out robins revenge army. but i'm warning you, you might goi nsane
1/26/2008 c1 14KeepingAmused
Nice work, I like how you made Will's loved ones flash painfully in a dream.
Very sentimental, although I don't know if Djaq would cry so easily.
But she comforted Will - which was totally in character. And I LOVE how the old and experienced RobMaz couple spotted them and.
keep writing! x
14KeepingAmusedNice work, I like how you made Will's loved ones flash painfully in a dream.
Very sentimental, although I don't know if Djaq would cry so easily.
But she comforted Will - which was totally in character. And I LOVE how the old and experienced RobMaz couple spotted them and.
keep writing! x
1/25/2008 c1 14UltimateOptimist
wow! This is really well written. Poor will (im a massive will fan but i love any will angst!) This is really sweet. great work!(sorry if that sounds patronising - i don't mean to be)
14UltimateOptimistwow! This is really well written. Poor will (im a massive will fan but i love any will angst!) This is really sweet. great work!(sorry if that sounds patronising - i don't mean to be)
1/25/2008 c1 Shanima
I really liked this - you showed Wills POV well and it was very sweet. You should write more!
Shanima -x-
I really liked this - you showed Wills POV well and it was very sweet. You should write more!
Shanima -x-