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12/5/2010 c1 1CharmingKarma
Cute :3 Loved it ^_^
11/27/2009 c1 15Dragoncl
I can't believe I didn't review this! I remember reading this a year ago and just loving it. Your characterizations are nicely fleshed especially for a one-shot that deals with characters we only know a little about. Even the first few lines told a whole story about Kushina.

Yeah for people who can't write sappy romance scenes! It means that we get a deeper relationship out of the characters though so it all works out. :)

Anyway, great fic. The writing was beautifully descriptive and a nice balance between dialogue and observations. The characters were well done and I couldn't find any blatant mistakes. I'm so happy I found this again.

Dragonscall
10/7/2009 c1 Okashi-Neegam
very talented toots
6/22/2009 c1 2jayfeather97
Good Job! Short and sweet
4/30/2008 c1 2TrenchcoatMan
that was cute
3/21/2008 c1 6False-Image
Aw! Cutest fanfic ever! It had it's moments of seriousness and humor. Really great work!
3/13/2008 c1 13Out of Breath
Aw! That was so adorable! Write another! XD
2/2/2008 c1 Monday the 14th
this is the FIRST Naruto fic I read and MAN! I love it!

Only watched 35 episodes of Naruto, but I gotta tell you, I love these two! Pft...who gives a damn about Naruto being the main character anyway?

lol. Great job!
1/28/2008 c1 4Ginriku
L O L! That was awesome! Although please do work on the other fic . haha an anycase that was an amazing impression of Kushina! Anyway good job!

P.S. I don't like pickles
1/26/2008 c1 10MoD366
Actually I'm not pissed because you used your time on writing that instead of updating Sealate Warpein, since it's the first MinaKushi (or something like that... sounds rather stupid if you ask me, but nevermind) I've ever read and I really like it^^

And I just realized that due to the fact that Minato and Kushina never really appeared in the Manga/Anime (AFAIK) you can make them be anyway you want, since they're kind of OCs, right? Could be really funny if you make them like... let's say Naruto and Sakura, just some more experiance in shinobi-life and stuff... and it could be a really funny story^^
1/26/2008 c1 Tenten Sama
yatta! YAY! i liked this oneshot! it was really good. and a very clever ending i must say XD AND i was longing for something to read today! lol i searche for any new stories and just prayed that i'd see an ff e-mail! yay! but this was really great...hehe very entertaining! yay!...

when are ya gonna update sealate warpein...I'M DYING HERE! and i swear if i see that bug...bla bla bla -goes into long rant-

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