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10/3/2010 c1 32Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Aww, poor Derek =(

I thought it was well written and I was sad to learn why he was so heartbroken in the beginning if he is the man that has everything.

Nicely done with the oneshot
4/26/2010 c1 7yannn
i like this story.very nice and meaningful.i'm glad i took time to read this
6/21/2008 c1 4Aelita Madeline
Definitely would describe this as angsty and touching. Excellent job. Reeally like the plot.
4/19/2008 c1 2Amorekristall
Hey thanks for the review :) It's my very first story so I hope u liked it so far.

I love how u write! This story is so sad :( I almost cried!

I'm gonna make sure to read all your stories! :D

Keep up the awsomeness!
4/18/2008 c1 596Ghostwriter
Great job. Very emotional. Catch ya on the flip side.
3/17/2008 c1 16I'mJustWeird
it's so sad! ='[
1/30/2008 c1 7Silverian Rose
wow, that was incredible! so emotionally gripping! hope you write more!
1/30/2008 c1 Sylar ate my brains
wow

that was so sad...poor derek

i loved it you did really well

why don't you add a casey pov of the situation?

make it a two-shot and get Casey's thoughts on the event and on her last thought before she passed...
1/30/2008 c1 taylorbabygirl
OMG that was very beautifully written. and sad to boot good work
1/29/2008 c1 1princetongirl
loved it update soon

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