
10/3/2010 c1
32Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Aww, poor Derek =(
I thought it was well written and I was sad to learn why he was so heartbroken in the beginning if he is the man that has everything.
Nicely done with the oneshot

Aww, poor Derek =(
I thought it was well written and I was sad to learn why he was so heartbroken in the beginning if he is the man that has everything.
Nicely done with the oneshot
6/21/2008 c1
4Aelita Madeline
Definitely would describe this as angsty and touching. Excellent job. Reeally like the plot.

Definitely would describe this as angsty and touching. Excellent job. Reeally like the plot.
4/19/2008 c1
2Amorekristall
Hey thanks for the review :) It's my very first story so I hope u liked it so far.
I love how u write! This story is so sad :( I almost cried!
I'm gonna make sure to read all your stories! :D
Keep up the awsomeness!

Hey thanks for the review :) It's my very first story so I hope u liked it so far.
I love how u write! This story is so sad :( I almost cried!
I'm gonna make sure to read all your stories! :D
Keep up the awsomeness!
1/30/2008 c1 Sylar ate my brains
wow
that was so sad...poor derek
i loved it you did really well
why don't you add a casey pov of the situation?
make it a two-shot and get Casey's thoughts on the event and on her last thought before she passed...
wow
that was so sad...poor derek
i loved it you did really well
why don't you add a casey pov of the situation?
make it a two-shot and get Casey's thoughts on the event and on her last thought before she passed...