for The Peach, the King, and the Eight Koopalings1/7/2009 c1 HarvesterOfHearts
HERE HAVE A PIE! HAVE ANOTHER PIE! AND ANOTHER!
I freakin loved this story. Larry and Roy are my favorite, so you can imagine how happy i was to see them have a large role in the story. I liked your Princess Peach, she was both sweet and badass, just like she should be. And the ending was hilarious.
Also! Oh my Gawd! Did Lugwig die? :O.
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Oh what the hell, have another pie.
HERE HAVE A PIE! HAVE ANOTHER PIE! AND ANOTHER!
I freakin loved this story. Larry and Roy are my favorite, so you can imagine how happy i was to see them have a large role in the story. I liked your Princess Peach, she was both sweet and badass, just like she should be. And the ending was hilarious.
Also! Oh my Gawd! Did Lugwig die? :O.
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Oh what the hell, have another pie.
12/26/2008 c7 
3Queen Ghidorah
Haha, cute story! Me likey. I do have one question, though: what happened to Ludwig?
3Queen GhidorahHaha, cute story! Me likey. I do have one question, though: what happened to Ludwig?
10/21/2008 c7 DarkLinkvsRainefan101
OMG poor Junior they're so mean! I liked the ending, so realistic(for Mario that is) oh, here's your pie!*hands over pie* it's blueberry lol, great story, maybe a sequel...?yes?no?maybe so?
OMG poor Junior they're so mean! I liked the ending, so realistic(for Mario that is) oh, here's your pie!*hands over pie* it's blueberry lol, great story, maybe a sequel...?yes?no?maybe so?
8/9/2008 c7 Anoymous
LOL! U R Awesome! Totally kewl ending. Wonder how long Mario will live with no spaghetti? anyhoo, U got fans! YA RLY! (O-o Mario, keep clicking, and-well, I won't say.But,a certain Koopaling will be after U.)
LOL.
LOL! U R Awesome! Totally kewl ending. Wonder how long Mario will live with no spaghetti? anyhoo, U got fans! YA RLY! (O-o Mario, keep clicking, and-well, I won't say.But,a certain Koopaling will be after U.)
LOL.
7/23/2008 c7 10The Great Mikey Weston
YOU IZ GETZ PIEZ! Cherry or Apple? Heck, you can take both! *hands you pies*
10The Great Mikey WestonYOU IZ GETZ PIEZ! Cherry or Apple? Heck, you can take both! *hands you pies*
7/9/2008 c5 James Birdsong
*squeels and hugs the author* So very excellent! Thank you for writing this.
*squeels and hugs the author* So very excellent! Thank you for writing this.
7/9/2008 c5 7RockSuperstar
Did the plumber jerks get Wendy (please say no). You've got to update... Well i dont know where this is going either (thats why im reading it, its good). of course its not good if you dont know... that was pointless wasnt it... well update soon :)
7RockSuperstarDid the plumber jerks get Wendy (please say no). You've got to update... Well i dont know where this is going either (thats why im reading it, its good). of course its not good if you dont know... that was pointless wasnt it... well update soon :)
2/26/2008 c4 Elza The Hedgehog
NO! MARIO CAN'T KILL BOWSER AND THE KOOPALINGS! IT'S NOT RIGHT! Please don't let them be okay in the Next Story, and by the Way love your Story, I think Mario and Toadsworth Have lost it and I read what he said about killing him and his Family I felt sad, I hope everything will be okay, Keep up the Great Work.
NO! MARIO CAN'T KILL BOWSER AND THE KOOPALINGS! IT'S NOT RIGHT! Please don't let them be okay in the Next Story, and by the Way love your Story, I think Mario and Toadsworth Have lost it and I read what he said about killing him and his Family I felt sad, I hope everything will be okay, Keep up the Great Work.
2/21/2008 c4 tregan219
A very interesting story. Just a few things I have found a bit confusing. How is it that there is no beds for Peach to sleep in when there should be plenty otherwise where would all the guards and troops sleep? Also how did Peach climb onto the rooftop to get Mario out on a castle tower? Where are all the guards gone? I am getting the picture that in this castle, Bowser and his kids live alone as well as Kamek but no guards whatsoever. However, a good story so far and I look forward to the next update.
A very interesting story. Just a few things I have found a bit confusing. How is it that there is no beds for Peach to sleep in when there should be plenty otherwise where would all the guards and troops sleep? Also how did Peach climb onto the rooftop to get Mario out on a castle tower? Where are all the guards gone? I am getting the picture that in this castle, Bowser and his kids live alone as well as Kamek but no guards whatsoever. However, a good story so far and I look forward to the next update.
2/7/2008 c4 KingBowserKoopa
Boy, what a cliffhanger to leave the story on. I agree with overlord, Mario is a dumbass, and Toadsworth is a bitch!
Anyway, update soon! I love this so far! The interaction between Peach and the Koopalings was absoultely sweet, and I hope to see more!
Boy, what a cliffhanger to leave the story on. I agree with overlord, Mario is a dumbass, and Toadsworth is a bitch!
Anyway, update soon! I love this so far! The interaction between Peach and the Koopalings was absoultely sweet, and I hope to see more!