for The Peach, the King, and the Eight Koopalings2/6/2008 c4 
11overlordofnobodies
NNO!Mario you [email protected]$$ and Toadsworth you b**ch.Ok Iam good now .The story is greating really great.
11overlordofnobodiesNNO!Mario you [email protected]$$ and Toadsworth you b**ch.Ok Iam good now .The story is greating really great.
2/5/2008 c4 le dead
ZOMGosh! THiZ PEch Hsa bene poSEssed! :O
Freaking hilarious chapter, loved the talks between Mario and Toadsworth. Love the over dramatic moments too!
ZOMGosh! THiZ PEch Hsa bene poSEssed! :O
Freaking hilarious chapter, loved the talks between Mario and Toadsworth. Love the over dramatic moments too!
2/5/2008 c3 5Return From the Ashes
I really love how this story is coming along. I especailly like how the characters interact with each other. It sounds like a real family and I think more stories need that. I can't wait to see what happens next so keep writing! :)
5Return From the AshesI really love how this story is coming along. I especailly like how the characters interact with each other. It sounds like a real family and I think more stories need that. I can't wait to see what happens next so keep writing! :)
2/3/2008 c3 11overlordofnobodies
I love how you made Peach hand Roy and Larry.I can so see it in my mind.I hope Peach cames back to watch the kids.Oh and I hope you get your video game back.
11overlordofnobodiesI love how you made Peach hand Roy and Larry.I can so see it in my mind.I hope Peach cames back to watch the kids.Oh and I hope you get your video game back.
2/2/2008 c2 overlordofnobodies
I love it.I think its really cute.Jr Is the best.I cant wait to see what Peach does in the next chapter.
I love it.I think its really cute.Jr Is the best.I cant wait to see what Peach does in the next chapter.
2/2/2008 c2 le dead
A little different... I like it but it seemed a bit rushed with Peach suddenly taking on the children and acting like a babysitter. Try gently easing her into it.
A little different... I like it but it seemed a bit rushed with Peach suddenly taking on the children and acting like a babysitter. Try gently easing her into it.