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2/6/2008 c4 11overlordofnobodies
NNO!Mario you $$ and Toadsworth you b**ch.Ok Iam good now .The story is greating really great.
2/5/2008 c4 le dead
ZOMGosh! THiZ PEch Hsa bene poSEssed! :O

Freaking hilarious chapter, loved the talks between Mario and Toadsworth. Love the over dramatic moments too!
2/5/2008 c3 5Return From the Ashes
I really love how this story is coming along. I especailly like how the characters interact with each other. It sounds like a real family and I think more stories need that. I can't wait to see what happens next so keep writing! :)
2/3/2008 c3 11overlordofnobodies
I love how you made Peach hand Roy and Larry.I can so see it in my mind.I hope Peach cames back to watch the kids.Oh and I hope you get your video game back.
2/3/2008 c3 le dead

Awesome fatter then santa-claus!
2/2/2008 c2 overlordofnobodies
I love it.I think its really cute.Jr Is the best.I cant wait to see what Peach does in the next chapter.
2/2/2008 c2 le dead
A little different... I like it but it seemed a bit rushed with Peach suddenly taking on the children and acting like a babysitter. Try gently easing her into it.
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