for Green Eyed Angel3/1/2008 c2 kattylin
this is really nice but you have to speed up the plot a bit, coz it might get boring if you dont
this is really nice but you have to speed up the plot a bit, coz it might get boring if you dont
2/23/2008 c3 
2LiFeLiGhT95
o! exciting! i'm so excited to see what happens! how are sasuke and sakura going to get along! i've read all 3 chapters and they are wonderful! you did a great job although your first language wasn't english. people who speak english as a first language are usually worse. trust me, i would know. but i have an 99(A) in language arts so... anyways, continue on!
UPDATE SOON!
2LiFeLiGhT95o! exciting! i'm so excited to see what happens! how are sasuke and sakura going to get along! i've read all 3 chapters and they are wonderful! you did a great job although your first language wasn't english. people who speak english as a first language are usually worse. trust me, i would know. but i have an 99(A) in language arts so... anyways, continue on!
UPDATE SOON!
2/16/2008 c3 Shanny1933
Hey!This is so great!Hope u update soon!Cz i can't wait 2 find out the next chappie!(^.^)~*~*~!
Hey!This is so great!Hope u update soon!Cz i can't wait 2 find out the next chappie!(^.^)~*~*~!
2/16/2008 c3 tobyness
Hehe. I love these kind of story lines. I hope you get over your writer block soon. _
Hehe. I love these kind of story lines. I hope you get over your writer block soon. _
2/13/2008 c3 Jennifer Jackson
helo! i'm still waiting for a reply! please can you write so i can read. thanks.
helo! i'm still waiting for a reply! please can you write so i can read. thanks.
2/12/2008 c3 raye85
wow i am really looking forward in seeing what he is going to be doing to turture her atleast. i wonder what tsunade and sasuke mom is up to?
wow i am really looking forward in seeing what he is going to be doing to turture her atleast. i wonder what tsunade and sasuke mom is up to?
2/12/2008 c3 Jennifer Jackson
hello! i was really into your fanfiction. i thought that you put alot of thought into it. even though your first language isn't english you did one hell of a job doing it! now if you really want more fans for your fanfiction(which you might not want.) you might want to consider trying to reply every now and then.
hello! i was really into your fanfiction. i thought that you put alot of thought into it. even though your first language isn't english you did one hell of a job doing it! now if you really want more fans for your fanfiction(which you might not want.) you might want to consider trying to reply every now and then.
2/11/2008 c1 jennifer jackson
that fanfiction was just omigosh! i really liked it. i read all three chapters and i want you to make more. you can't just stop.
i also want 2 kno how you can create fanfictions?
that fanfiction was just omigosh! i really liked it. i read all three chapters and i want you to make more. you can't just stop.
i also want 2 kno how you can create fanfictions?