6/10/2011 c11 5Future Starkid Member
This is so good. I can't wait 'till you update.

7/18/2008 c11 24The Sage of Spirits
Okay, I don't really get it but hey! It's a parody. lol

Don't have many OCs (I have three so far, which will increase though), but I don't see the point in having them appear in this story, since I find it... unnecessary. ^^"

"neccisary" -'Necessary'

"annual pokemon catching contest" -This should be capitalized.

Short but, eh, I can understand why. So don't worry about that.

Good Luck.

SoS

7/18/2008 c11 4Mieu
*whump* Not much to say for that chapter, except SNOWCONES!

5/20/2008 c10 41freakyanimegal
n.n Yeah, Genis, you work those sarcastic sentences...n.n

4/14/2008 c9 The Sage of Spirits
Fourth wall breaking in a parody's alright.

"Nova's Ca-er... Pokecenter." -Loved it. XD

Ah! Leet! XO

You never said what level Charmander was at, nor what stat bonuses it received. XD

Good Luck.

SoS

4/14/2008 c9 41freakyanimegal
They could just have Charmander cremate Genis...eheheheheh...lol. XD

4/13/2008 c9 10Justasimplekidfrombrooklyn
lol poor genis

u is evals for cliff hanger =3

3/25/2008 c8 3TropicaFinn
Amazingly funny, great job! Favoriting the story and checking for updates deffinately ^^

Can't wait for more!