for Underneath The Invisible Mask8/28/2022 c1 catspats31
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While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
9/22/2017 c1 Guest
Great Smut
Great Smut
12/16/2010 c1 
4Thisismedealwithit
Oh my god. i hate it when people dont know their awesomeness. youre a really good author and this was amazing. stop saying you suck woman. because you wouldnt have i dont even remeber how many reviews! there were like 600 something! ive read alot of youre stories without realising it. i looked through your stories list and reaslized omb id read several and they were all amazing. ^^ youre one of my fav authors..
4ThisismedealwithitOh my god. i hate it when people dont know their awesomeness. youre a really good author and this was amazing. stop saying you suck woman. because you wouldnt have i dont even remeber how many reviews! there were like 600 something! ive read alot of youre stories without realising it. i looked through your stories list and reaslized omb id read several and they were all amazing. ^^ youre one of my fav authors..
2/3/2010 c1 1buffy102
Dude seriously! that was your first smut? It was WAY TO GOOD. alot better then other stuff I read. But then again, don't they says first-timers are always the best XD. Anyway Loved it, and hope to see more :).
1buffy102Dude seriously! that was your first smut? It was WAY TO GOOD. alot better then other stuff I read. But then again, don't they says first-timers are always the best XD. Anyway Loved it, and hope to see more :).
8/25/2008 c1 6Choices
aww, kawaii ending!
the lemon was so-so, better than anything i can do
awesome sequel!
6Choicesaww, kawaii ending!
the lemon was so-so, better than anything i can do
awesome sequel!
7/27/2008 c1 24Loopy Looney Charny
dis was a good little one-shot...it was verrii...hott! hehehe...^_^
24Loopy Looney Charnydis was a good little one-shot...it was verrii...hott! hehehe...^_^
3/27/2008 c1 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten
Heya! I totally loved it! Plz UD ASAP... Pretty Please With Sugar On Top... xD
- Tenshi no Yoko -
Heya! I totally loved it! Plz UD ASAP... Pretty Please With Sugar On Top... xD
- Tenshi no Yoko -
3/22/2008 c1 74China Dolly
I simply adore your stories. I've read most of them ^^
But this one is nice. I can already see Sasuke running with Naruto in his arms like that!
But I was wondering one thing... Since in your fic. Why don't you love me? You mention Di-rect, which is obviously a Dutch band and in this fic. you made a typo. At least I think you meant since but typed "sinds". And well, since I'm Dutch I was wondering if you are too ;)
Anyway, back on topic, I love your fics and you're a great writer!
- China Dolly
74China DollyI simply adore your stories. I've read most of them ^^
But this one is nice. I can already see Sasuke running with Naruto in his arms like that!
But I was wondering one thing... Since in your fic. Why don't you love me? You mention Di-rect, which is obviously a Dutch band and in this fic. you made a typo. At least I think you meant since but typed "sinds". And well, since I'm Dutch I was wondering if you are too ;)
Anyway, back on topic, I love your fics and you're a great writer!
- China Dolly
3/9/2008 c1 2KuroKitt
Muwhaha, squeal!
I need to look before I make reviews. XD This was good for your first one. I'm still not writing scenes like this so, yeah, to me it was good. I wouldn't describe the feeling as weird, it would be more or less described as painful, since the rectum isn't made for things going up in it. Just my own opinion, I liked the smut a lot though, I would describe the theme as: 'Sasuke icecream'. Fangirls would go wild to buy some, joking. See you in another one of your stories,
Kitt
2KuroKittMuwhaha, squeal!
I need to look before I make reviews. XD This was good for your first one. I'm still not writing scenes like this so, yeah, to me it was good. I wouldn't describe the feeling as weird, it would be more or less described as painful, since the rectum isn't made for things going up in it. Just my own opinion, I liked the smut a lot though, I would describe the theme as: 'Sasuke icecream'. Fangirls would go wild to buy some, joking. See you in another one of your stories,
Kitt