for The Proposal7/31/2013 c1 unknown
loved it!
loved it!
2/13/2008 c1 
6Formidable Rain
Um, I'm pretty sure that Kagome's Mom's name is Mai or something...just for future refference ;)
6Formidable RainUm, I'm pretty sure that Kagome's Mom's name is Mai or something...just for future refference ;)
2/7/2008 c1 1starlight0017
the story started out very good. the ending, however, could have been better. it seemed to have stopped suddenly especially since the rest of the story was so good.
1starlight0017the story started out very good. the ending, however, could have been better. it seemed to have stopped suddenly especially since the rest of the story was so good.
2/7/2008 c1 BoredGirl17
You Killed the ending, everything else was great but the ending could have been done better.n.n
Is there a Part 2 in the works?
You Killed the ending, everything else was great but the ending could have been done better.n.n
Is there a Part 2 in the works?
2/6/2008 c1 5kittykritik
I like this story. I was a little confused as to what was dialogue in the story, but I liked the actual story once I got that down. It figures that the two of them would fight before EVER telling each other their feelings toward each other!
Maybe this wasn't the approach you were going for, but I always think their arguments are funny... tehehe
5kittykritikI like this story. I was a little confused as to what was dialogue in the story, but I liked the actual story once I got that down. It figures that the two of them would fight before EVER telling each other their feelings toward each other!
Maybe this wasn't the approach you were going for, but I always think their arguments are funny... tehehe