for First Day Last Day7/19/2008 c1 
1jexx
This is great - love the concept, and the characters are spot on. You should have more reviews!
1jexxThis is great - love the concept, and the characters are spot on. You should have more reviews!
2/11/2008 c1 34Snowfilly
Hi. Yes, I like this, the first part more than the second as I'm not really into alien worms - yuk. If the intention there was to be very disturbing, then you achieved it.
I think my favourite line was Suzie's summing up of her the team would greet Tosh - spot on characterisation. As was Jack getting ready to shoot Gamma.
One quibble - I think Ianto joined after Tosh - he arrived after the Cybermen invasion, didn't he? Still, timelines are there to be ignored.
Look forward to anymore Torchwood stuff you might be planning on writing. Rose
34SnowfillyHi. Yes, I like this, the first part more than the second as I'm not really into alien worms - yuk. If the intention there was to be very disturbing, then you achieved it.
I think my favourite line was Suzie's summing up of her the team would greet Tosh - spot on characterisation. As was Jack getting ready to shoot Gamma.
One quibble - I think Ianto joined after Tosh - he arrived after the Cybermen invasion, didn't he? Still, timelines are there to be ignored.
Look forward to anymore Torchwood stuff you might be planning on writing. Rose
2/7/2008 c1 24Hiril Moon
I like the angle you had here. As in, it wasn't just Tosh's first day, so you looked at the bigger picture. I dunno, Ijust like the idea.
...Plus the worms made me squick. So that's good on the ideas front, but not for stomachs of the world.
24Hiril MoonI like the angle you had here. As in, it wasn't just Tosh's first day, so you looked at the bigger picture. I dunno, Ijust like the idea.
...Plus the worms made me squick. So that's good on the ideas front, but not for stomachs of the world.