for A Plaid Pillow12/24/2008 c3 tp
hope you get over your cold, that was SO amazing i want to read more i want to know what happens write more it was wicked good!
hope you get over your cold, that was SO amazing i want to read more i want to know what happens write more it was wicked good!
6/23/2008 c3 
3TheMadPen
Aw, poor Edward. I hate that he feels so terrible about himself... but I love the way you write for Edward, it is so completely him. =]
10 YEARS! Wow, Bella is, what, 28 now? That's kinda akward... that is, if she DOES get back with Edward (wishful hopeing here) but I guess true love would conquer all!
3TheMadPenAw, poor Edward. I hate that he feels so terrible about himself... but I love the way you write for Edward, it is so completely him. =]
10 YEARS! Wow, Bella is, what, 28 now? That's kinda akward... that is, if she DOES get back with Edward (wishful hopeing here) but I guess true love would conquer all!
3/20/2008 c3 midnight-princess6
hey! great story, but I am wondering how you got the idea?, it's really good.And what is Alice trying to keep Edward from knowing?
hey! great story, but I am wondering how you got the idea?, it's really good.And what is Alice trying to keep Edward from knowing?
3/18/2008 c3 6stare at string
Poor sick, sneezing author... who writes wonderful fanfiction (except for the j b thing, but still) and needs to update!
6stare at stringPoor sick, sneezing author... who writes wonderful fanfiction (except for the j b thing, but still) and needs to update!
2/10/2008 c2 1Jade Ellizabeth
o_o
First,
Hooray for being ExB !
:D
Second,
Horray for making Edward decide to kill Jacob.
Yay! :)
I didn't understand the last few lines though, about Alice shopping and when she asked why he was still there.
Hm.
Update soon!
(:
1Jade Ellizabetho_o
First,
Hooray for being ExB !
:D
Second,
Horray for making Edward decide to kill Jacob.
Yay! :)
I didn't understand the last few lines though, about Alice shopping and when she asked why he was still there.
Hm.
Update soon!
(:
2/9/2008 c2 3TheMadPen
Ah! Your ExB! Yea - this makes me so happy! I love getting to see inside Edwards mind! The faster you get out the third chapter, the better! I love it!
3TheMadPenAh! Your ExB! Yea - this makes me so happy! I love getting to see inside Edwards mind! The faster you get out the third chapter, the better! I love it!
2/9/2008 c1 1Hale WILL provail
i really like it sis lol. keep it up go faster il actually read this one instead of ur other one jkjkjk. yea mayb not lol. but i would actually put a sort of prologe on there so ppl understand kk. dont mean to b rude love yea
STELLAR!
1Hale WILL provaili really like it sis lol. keep it up go faster il actually read this one instead of ur other one jkjkjk. yea mayb not lol. but i would actually put a sort of prologe on there so ppl understand kk. dont mean to b rude love yea
STELLAR!
2/8/2008 c1 H. Devons
very well written. i liked that it went deep into the feelings but who is juliet? when is this going on?
i really really liked it though.
-kudos... my first comment ever-
very well written. i liked that it went deep into the feelings but who is juliet? when is this going on?
i really really liked it though.
-kudos... my first comment ever-
2/7/2008 c1 3TheMadPen
AH! NO BELLA CAN'T LEAVE EDWARD! BUT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!
Now I am curious and I have to see it through... but it will make me cry. :( But still - dont quit the story!
PS: I would really love a review too! :)
3TheMadPenAH! NO BELLA CAN'T LEAVE EDWARD! BUT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!
Now I am curious and I have to see it through... but it will make me cry. :( But still - dont quit the story!
PS: I would really love a review too! :)
2/7/2008 c1 3CullensAndHalesForever
It's good deffnitnly! But I do wish Alice's visions woulda been playing mind-tricks on her! Im such a masochists,I decide to read these stories,the ones where BElla chooses Jacob-hisses- over Edward,and it just stresses me out and makes me cry! But anyways,still a great story!Cant wait for u to update!
3CullensAndHalesForeverIt's good deffnitnly! But I do wish Alice's visions woulda been playing mind-tricks on her! Im such a masochists,I decide to read these stories,the ones where BElla chooses Jacob-hisses- over Edward,and it just stresses me out and makes me cry! But anyways,still a great story!Cant wait for u to update!
2/7/2008 c1 edwardluvbellax
Oh wow that was REALLY depressing! But I loved it! very good job
Oh wow that was REALLY depressing! But I loved it! very good job
2/7/2008 c1 1Jade Ellizabeth
I definitly think this story has potential.
I was a little choked up reading just this.
I liked it, so I say go for it!
1Jade EllizabethI definitly think this story has potential.
I was a little choked up reading just this.
I liked it, so I say go for it!