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38Ihni
It was good. And that was a great present, too! I'm impressed, and a little inspired.
38IhniIt was good. And that was a great present, too! I'm impressed, and a little inspired.
11/23/2008 c8 2WolfFreak-185
AWESOME! ALL I CAN SAY SICNCE I READ THIS AFTER YOU FINISHED THIS! OH WELL AWESOME!
2WolfFreak-185AWESOME! ALL I CAN SAY SICNCE I READ THIS AFTER YOU FINISHED THIS! OH WELL AWESOME!
11/13/2008 c8 Autumnights
Um, how do I say this? I LOVED IT! This is now officialy my favorite National Treasure fic. Thrilling, funny beyond belief, beautifully written and the writing style was genius. *Ego boost 10 points for you* I love how you portray all the characters. Thank you so much for continuing this story into andother fic. I love a good sequel. ^_^
Um, how do I say this? I LOVED IT! This is now officialy my favorite National Treasure fic. Thrilling, funny beyond belief, beautifully written and the writing style was genius. *Ego boost 10 points for you* I love how you portray all the characters. Thank you so much for continuing this story into andother fic. I love a good sequel. ^_^
9/9/2008 c8 Lindelas
This was the first NT story I've ever read and I loved it! What really impressed me was that you really captured the character's personalities,(especially Riley) which is somewhat unusual in fan fiction, I've noticed. :)Anyway, excellent story! I hope you write more!
This was the first NT story I've ever read and I loved it! What really impressed me was that you really captured the character's personalities,(especially Riley) which is somewhat unusual in fan fiction, I've noticed. :)Anyway, excellent story! I hope you write more!
7/28/2008 c8 Carter1994
*GASP* I cannot believe I forgot to review this story! Sorry!
Anyway... That was terrific! I absolutely loved it, everyone was very much in character (a very important aspect) and the plot was amazing, and bonus points will be awarded for it starring my favorite character! :D
However, now you've gotten me INCREDIBLY curious. Why doesn't Riley like hospitals? Although this is kind of a no-duh question, I despise them myself... (Spent a week in one from a spontaneous pnuemothorax [lung collapse]) Please, please, please, PLEASE update / publish the answer soon, I hate being left hanging!
Okay, well that's enough rambling from me. Once again, great story!
~Carter1994
P.S. You earned a 94/100 rating, congratulations!
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*GASP* I cannot believe I forgot to review this story! Sorry!
Anyway... That was terrific! I absolutely loved it, everyone was very much in character (a very important aspect) and the plot was amazing, and bonus points will be awarded for it starring my favorite character! :D
However, now you've gotten me INCREDIBLY curious. Why doesn't Riley like hospitals? Although this is kind of a no-duh question, I despise them myself... (Spent a week in one from a spontaneous pnuemothorax [lung collapse]) Please, please, please, PLEASE update / publish the answer soon, I hate being left hanging!
Okay, well that's enough rambling from me. Once again, great story!
~Carter1994
P.S. You earned a 94/100 rating, congratulations!
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7/17/2008 c8 4Samps432
aw that was so good! Riley was really funny in this story, great characterization.
I really loved this story, great job
4Samps432aw that was so good! Riley was really funny in this story, great characterization.
I really loved this story, great job
5/31/2008 c8 mic19671967
What an awesome story! I love hurt/comfort/angst. You did a great job capturing the essence of the characters.
Mic (the wife)
What an awesome story! I love hurt/comfort/angst. You did a great job capturing the essence of the characters.
Mic (the wife)
5/21/2008 c8 anna707
i personally loved this story^_^ very well written. great job. i;m almost regret finishing it lol
i personally loved this story^_^ very well written. great job. i;m almost regret finishing it lol
5/20/2008 c8 1diana goddess of the moon
Oh my word, I JUST finished watching the first Indiana Jones, I decided while waiting for the second to load, I'll find something to read. I couldn't believe this coincidence.
Great story, by the way. Poor Riley, lol, you really got Ben's character spot on. He's real difficult to read, but you somehow did it. Well done.
1diana goddess of the moonOh my word, I JUST finished watching the first Indiana Jones, I decided while waiting for the second to load, I'll find something to read. I couldn't believe this coincidence.
Great story, by the way. Poor Riley, lol, you really got Ben's character spot on. He's real difficult to read, but you somehow did it. Well done.
5/11/2008 c8 3LupinandHarry
This was a nice story, I enjoyed it a lot! Cant wait to read the sequel! ^-^
3LupinandHarryThis was a nice story, I enjoyed it a lot! Cant wait to read the sequel! ^-^