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1/15/2010 c8 17NightWriter003
That was AWESOME I loved your cliffhangers.
10/4/2009 c8 11hogwartshobbiton
aww that was a brilliant story :D riley! :D thankyou! xx
7/9/2009 c8 38Ihni
It was good. And that was a great present, too! I'm impressed, and a little inspired.
4/30/2009 c8 84supergirl3684
that was great! I do hope there's more! :D
11/23/2008 c8 2WolfFreak-185
AWESOME! ALL I CAN SAY SICNCE I READ THIS AFTER YOU FINISHED THIS! OH WELL AWESOME!
11/13/2008 c8 Autumnights
Um, how do I say this? I LOVED IT! This is now officialy my favorite National Treasure fic. Thrilling, funny beyond belief, beautifully written and the writing style was genius. *Ego boost 10 points for you* I love how you portray all the characters. Thank you so much for continuing this story into andother fic. I love a good sequel. ^_^
9/9/2008 c8 Lindelas
This was the first NT story I've ever read and I loved it! What really impressed me was that you really captured the character's personalities,(especially Riley) which is somewhat unusual in fan fiction, I've noticed. :)Anyway, excellent story! I hope you write more!
8/24/2008 c8 1Sarai
Cute.
7/28/2008 c8 Carter1994
*GASP* I cannot believe I forgot to review this story! Sorry!

Anyway... That was terrific! I absolutely loved it, everyone was very much in character (a very important aspect) and the plot was amazing, and bonus points will be awarded for it starring my favorite character! :D

However, now you've gotten me INCREDIBLY curious. Why doesn't Riley like hospitals? Although this is kind of a no-duh question, I despise them myself... (Spent a week in one from a spontaneous pnuemothorax [lung collapse]) Please, please, please, PLEASE update / publish the answer soon, I hate being left hanging!

Okay, well that's enough rambling from me. Once again, great story!

~Carter1994

P.S. You earned a 94/100 rating, congratulations!

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7/17/2008 c8 4Samps432
aw that was so good! Riley was really funny in this story, great characterization.

I really loved this story, great job
6/1/2008 c8 Receneck
Aww that was great!
5/31/2008 c8 mic19671967
What an awesome story! I love hurt/comfort/angst. You did a great job capturing the essence of the characters.

Mic (the wife)
5/21/2008 c8 anna707
i personally loved this story^_^ very well written. great job. i;m almost regret finishing it lol
5/20/2008 c8 1diana goddess of the moon
Oh my word, I JUST finished watching the first Indiana Jones, I decided while waiting for the second to load, I'll find something to read. I couldn't believe this coincidence.

Great story, by the way. Poor Riley, lol, you really got Ben's character spot on. He's real difficult to read, but you somehow did it. Well done.
5/11/2008 c8 3LupinandHarry
This was a nice story, I enjoyed it a lot! Cant wait to read the sequel! ^-^
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