4/6/2008 c8 2bounce.like.a.Tigger
I loved it! hehe you're lucky i didn't have to come and kill you! :P Yeah I so fell behind on your story everytime i'd start to read my mom would need me so annoying but yay! haha but I finally got to review! lol It was great and write more stories soon... or else... lol
I loved it! hehe you're lucky i didn't have to come and kill you! :P Yeah I so fell behind on your story everytime i'd start to read my mom would need me so annoying but yay! haha but I finally got to review! lol It was great and write more stories soon... or else... lol
3/26/2008 c8 elizabeth
i loved it! keep writing, youre good at it!
i loved it! keep writing, youre good at it!
3/24/2008 c8 92Tori of Lorien
That was a great story^.^ The Indiana Jones thing was priceless! Please write more stories soon^.^
~Tori
That was a great story^.^ The Indiana Jones thing was priceless! Please write more stories soon^.^
~Tori
3/23/2008 c8 xxandxy
aw cute ending! glad Riley is okay, of course.
this story was a great read! I'll be looking for that 'next story'! :)
aw cute ending! glad Riley is okay, of course.
this story was a great read! I'll be looking for that 'next story'! :)
3/23/2008 c8 ntfreak13
That was a cool story. Love the way you wrapped up things...Indiana Jones...that was funny...so Riley!=D
That was a cool story. Love the way you wrapped up things...Indiana Jones...that was funny...so Riley!=D
3/23/2008 c8 10ShadowWolfDagger
Awesome ending to a rockin story, I can't wait for the sequel to it and figure out why Riley hates hospitals so much. Do you know when you will be getting the next story out?
~Tala~
Awesome ending to a rockin story, I can't wait for the sequel to it and figure out why Riley hates hospitals so much. Do you know when you will be getting the next story out?
~Tala~
3/22/2008 c8 52Jaeh
YAY indy jones hat! are ya gonna watch the 4th one(straying.. straying...)
anyway, that was AWEsome! too bad it's finished now and all that... wanna read another fic from ya soon!
-JAeh x)
YAY indy jones hat! are ya gonna watch the 4th one(straying.. straying...)
anyway, that was AWEsome! too bad it's finished now and all that... wanna read another fic from ya soon!
-JAeh x)
3/22/2008 c8 2Maira Blue
An awesome story with a great ending! The family picture and Indiana Jones hat sound like perfect gifts for Ben. :) Keep up the good work!
An awesome story with a great ending! The family picture and Indiana Jones hat sound like perfect gifts for Ben. :) Keep up the good work!
3/22/2008 c8 maggie1633
was this the last chapter? too bad. Liked this a lot. Hope for more fics based on national treasure from you:)
was this the last chapter? too bad. Liked this a lot. Hope for more fics based on national treasure from you:)
3/22/2008 c8 8Fantasy's Magic
This was a good story, and I'm looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing!
Fantasy's Magic
This was a good story, and I'm looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing!
Fantasy's Magic