
9/15/2024 c25 WhatHaveIDiscovered
An interesting story with some cool magic. Well done and thanks for sharing!
An interesting story with some cool magic. Well done and thanks for sharing!
8/23/2024 c25 Critical reader
An interesting way of dealing with the menaces that I have not read about before. Regarding the new ambassador, you are perhaps aware that the Germans have an way of speaking of "sending someone to the desert" when that person is assigned a more or less pointless, at any rate non-lucrative new post?
An interesting way of dealing with the menaces that I have not read about before. Regarding the new ambassador, you are perhaps aware that the Germans have an way of speaking of "sending someone to the desert" when that person is assigned a more or less pointless, at any rate non-lucrative new post?
7/1/2024 c21 WeisseHex
Voldie just has no limits, does he. But I'm sure even with THIS he won't be able to prevail, the freakin' idiot!
Voldie just has no limits, does he. But I'm sure even with THIS he won't be able to prevail, the freakin' idiot!
6/30/2024 c1 WeisseHex
I just love Luna, she is so special and I think that Harry and her would be a great couple!
I just love Luna, she is so special and I think that Harry and her would be a great couple!
5/22/2024 c16 majere4
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Flights of Fancy; Teaching Your Child to Ride their First Broom.' Tears came to his eyes as the emotion threatened to overwhelm him
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... *sniff* yah, me too.
Brilliant.
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Flights of Fancy; Teaching Your Child to Ride their First Broom.' Tears came to his eyes as the emotion threatened to overwhelm him
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... *sniff* yah, me too.
Brilliant.
5/19/2024 c8 majere4
If she didn't want to wake up he saw no reason why he should, so hugging her tightly he closed his own eyes and peacefully dozed off. It was an hour later when the two woke again, feeling rested and curiously happy.
"That was my best sleep ever," Harry said contentedly.
"Mine too," Luna replied shyly.
"
Too Cute! Also, too bad their gentle love isn't causing tommy migraines :p
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"What is it?" Harry asked in awe.
"It's Elfin Silk; my Grandmother had several friends who were elves, and they gave her the fabric as a gift,"
"
Hmmm... so, you have a different idea of the Fae than most. It's nice to not worry about them as capricious and dangerous.
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Ron, having learned his lesson after the 'Victor Krum affair,' had immediately asked Hermione to go with him. It was apparent that Ron had finally discovered that Hermione was a 'girl,' and a rather pretty one at that; and he wasn't taking any chances with someone else asking her first.
"
Hmmm... *sighs in resignation*
Sucks that you took out Kingsley, but it only shows how easy it is to use magic to overcome pretty much any defense.
The only thing that doesn't make sense is the way the deez left so much evidence. Transfigure the bodies and dispose of them and the DMLE is left with no solid trail to follow in closing that vulnerability. I guess your deez/tommy just have zero give-a-shite about 'future plans'. Given that this fits with their canon counterparts, I'll stop nitpicking :D
Wait, what? The kids are going to learn to go straight to Azkaban and the cowardly wolf is going to actually teach them? Fuck the what?
The 'Harry Potter Special' sounds like one heckuva good sundae!
I'm just glad the deez didn't show up and ruin their last gasp of lightheartedness.
I'm sure you've caught a lot of flack from the dark turn this story has taken. I'll admit that I was caught off guard, but I totally appreciate that you're telling a HP story and, as long as tommy and his vermin are free, there will be darkness and suffering. You've also glossed over the training a bit in my opinion, but I'm hoping we'll see some very effective results when the ferret and his goons eventually try to strike. The thing is, unless I'm totally wrong, the little killer ponce won't be the same braggart-without-balls that was so Gryffindor about his hate-crush on Harry for five straight years. I'm dreading the idea, but it seems quite likely that at least one more innocent will die before the scum can be put down.
If she didn't want to wake up he saw no reason why he should, so hugging her tightly he closed his own eyes and peacefully dozed off. It was an hour later when the two woke again, feeling rested and curiously happy.
"That was my best sleep ever," Harry said contentedly.
"Mine too," Luna replied shyly.
"
Too Cute! Also, too bad their gentle love isn't causing tommy migraines :p
"
"What is it?" Harry asked in awe.
"It's Elfin Silk; my Grandmother had several friends who were elves, and they gave her the fabric as a gift,"
"
Hmmm... so, you have a different idea of the Fae than most. It's nice to not worry about them as capricious and dangerous.
"
Ron, having learned his lesson after the 'Victor Krum affair,' had immediately asked Hermione to go with him. It was apparent that Ron had finally discovered that Hermione was a 'girl,' and a rather pretty one at that; and he wasn't taking any chances with someone else asking her first.
"
Hmmm... *sighs in resignation*
Sucks that you took out Kingsley, but it only shows how easy it is to use magic to overcome pretty much any defense.
The only thing that doesn't make sense is the way the deez left so much evidence. Transfigure the bodies and dispose of them and the DMLE is left with no solid trail to follow in closing that vulnerability. I guess your deez/tommy just have zero give-a-shite about 'future plans'. Given that this fits with their canon counterparts, I'll stop nitpicking :D
Wait, what? The kids are going to learn to go straight to Azkaban and the cowardly wolf is going to actually teach them? Fuck the what?
The 'Harry Potter Special' sounds like one heckuva good sundae!
I'm just glad the deez didn't show up and ruin their last gasp of lightheartedness.
I'm sure you've caught a lot of flack from the dark turn this story has taken. I'll admit that I was caught off guard, but I totally appreciate that you're telling a HP story and, as long as tommy and his vermin are free, there will be darkness and suffering. You've also glossed over the training a bit in my opinion, but I'm hoping we'll see some very effective results when the ferret and his goons eventually try to strike. The thing is, unless I'm totally wrong, the little killer ponce won't be the same braggart-without-balls that was so Gryffindor about his hate-crush on Harry for five straight years. I'm dreading the idea, but it seems quite likely that at least one more innocent will die before the scum can be put down.
5/19/2024 c7 majere4
WOW, the concord grape war was... EPIC! :D
A bit of a complaint, the ferret has gone from 'a very frightened young boy' to cold blooded murderer lusting to kill his classmates in one afternoon. Not that either descriptor is beyond the character, but the change felt too sudden.
I wonder what wards the little shite stain is supposedly going to take down? It doesn't seem likely that they'd expect a young boy heartless killer to suddenly be capable to taking down property wards...
'Serius' old house'
Sirius'
I'll keep my thoughts on snivelus to myself.
WOW, the concord grape war was... EPIC! :D
A bit of a complaint, the ferret has gone from 'a very frightened young boy' to cold blooded murderer lusting to kill his classmates in one afternoon. Not that either descriptor is beyond the character, but the change felt too sudden.
I wonder what wards the little shite stain is supposedly going to take down? It doesn't seem likely that they'd expect a young boy heartless killer to suddenly be capable to taking down property wards...
'Serius' old house'
Sirius'
I'll keep my thoughts on snivelus to myself.
5/19/2024 c6 majere4
I'm just loving this slow bloom of their relationship.
The action makes for a solid story, moving the plot along, but this reminds me of one of Sweet Shireen's tales - a genuine joy to read.
I'm just loving this slow bloom of their relationship.
The action makes for a solid story, moving the plot along, but this reminds me of one of Sweet Shireen's tales - a genuine joy to read.
5/19/2024 c5 majere4
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Do you think we can do it again?"
"Of course, maybe if we're lucky it will be raining. It's even nicer in the rain," Luna replied dreamily.
Harry looked up at the slightly cloudy sky. "I can hardly wait," he said hopefully.
"
Wow... he's just so at ease with her. The idea of sleeping out in the rain would make almost anyone protest, or at least try to get some clarification... he doesn't hesitate to not only accept, but eagerly anticipate it. Simply lovely!
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"The Dark Lord will destroy them," Trunuffen said with certainty.
"No, 'The Marauders' will destroy him and all who stand with him," Harry said defiantly.
It was there that the interview ended, but a new word was on the lips of witches and wizards all over Britain: "Marauders."
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Incredible turn in the story, well done!
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Do you think we can do it again?"
"Of course, maybe if we're lucky it will be raining. It's even nicer in the rain," Luna replied dreamily.
Harry looked up at the slightly cloudy sky. "I can hardly wait," he said hopefully.
"
Wow... he's just so at ease with her. The idea of sleeping out in the rain would make almost anyone protest, or at least try to get some clarification... he doesn't hesitate to not only accept, but eagerly anticipate it. Simply lovely!
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"
"The Dark Lord will destroy them," Trunuffen said with certainty.
"No, 'The Marauders' will destroy him and all who stand with him," Harry said defiantly.
It was there that the interview ended, but a new word was on the lips of witches and wizards all over Britain: "Marauders."
"
Incredible turn in the story, well done!
5/13/2024 c14
13Freddie Rindklip
I really cannot continue to read where one side is trying to seriously harm or kill; while the other is looking to humiliate.

I really cannot continue to read where one side is trying to seriously harm or kill; while the other is looking to humiliate.
2/8/2024 c25 Schnuff
It was a nice story.
From the get go it was clear that this isn't about fighting (and reading about the few fights in this story...).
So thank you for sharing this story.
It was a nice story.
From the get go it was clear that this isn't about fighting (and reading about the few fights in this story...).
So thank you for sharing this story.
11/30/2023 c25 S0310
Loved it. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Really sweet. Wish there was more but that’s only because it was a wrench to finish it. Again, thank you
Loved it. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Really sweet. Wish there was more but that’s only because it was a wrench to finish it. Again, thank you