for Distant Cousins9/3/2022 c18 
1Celynne
Ok, I like this story, but during the sorting and in the end of the story I got annoyed. During the sorting McGonagall should say Potter Harry not Harry Potter
(and so on). Plus when the characters are in they should basically say Hyuga Hinata not Hinata Hyuga. So why?
1CelynneOk, I like this story, but during the sorting and in the end of the story I got annoyed. During the sorting McGonagall should say Potter Harry not Harry Potter
(and so on). Plus when the characters are in they should basically say Hyuga Hinata not Hinata Hyuga. So why?
8/10/2022 c9 Chris Tacha
Love the story. Just wanted to mention that you forgot to describe how they are dressed so we can’t understand why Molly is scandalized by how they are dressed. Keep up the good work.
Love the story. Just wanted to mention that you forgot to describe how they are dressed so we can’t understand why Molly is scandalized by how they are dressed. Keep up the good work.
8/2/2022 c18 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I liked how many of the things went in this chapter and I also like the matchups for the third round as well. I do wonder what you have planned for when the teammates that are also couples when there match comes up. I do hope when that time comes you go into a good bit of detail on how there fights go. If there fights even come up that is.
I do wish that the chapter was a bit longer then it was though with a bit more added here and there when appropriate. Like the time the spent in he tower and who they interacted with. Things like that.
I also wonder if our group of four will some how help lee recover or not as well since they probable could.
I liked how many of the things went in this chapter and I also like the matchups for the third round as well. I do wonder what you have planned for when the teammates that are also couples when there match comes up. I do hope when that time comes you go into a good bit of detail on how there fights go. If there fights even come up that is.
I do wish that the chapter was a bit longer then it was though with a bit more added here and there when appropriate. Like the time the spent in he tower and who they interacted with. Things like that.
I also wonder if our group of four will some how help lee recover or not as well since they probable could.
8/1/2022 c18 Jostanos
You're welcome. Please continue when you may. :)
The third round will certainly be interesting this time around.
How may their training go? Who may be training them respectively?
You're welcome. Please continue when you may. :)
The third round will certainly be interesting this time around.
How may their training go? Who may be training them respectively?
8/1/2022 c18 3WhiteElfElder
Things are going to get interesting, and when the attack comes Harry and team can stop holding back.
3WhiteElfElderThings are going to get interesting, and when the attack comes Harry and team can stop holding back.
6/29/2022 c17 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I wasn’t sure what to really think of this story at first since it seemed like Ginny wouldn’t be paired with Harry but I found myself to enjoy reading it. I still hope hope that Ginny would end up with Harry and Haku since it does not sit right with me for Ginny to be with anyone else and I wish it wouldn’t bother me like it does.
Maybe Ginny and Haku could be bi so it could actually work out and make it possible. Could say that The ice ability could be passed on to children Harry has with both Ginny and Haku. A bit of a reach but that’s what’s so great about fanfiction. Konoha could do some kind of test I’m sure.
I wonder what the next many chapters will be like from here during there time in Konoha and how you plan to have things go for everyone. I can’t wait to find out how things work out and how the fights will go when they come up. I do hope they could at least help gaara be able to have a normal life with a stable seal instead of dying. I always liked gaara and felt bad for him.
I wasn’t sure what to really think of this story at first since it seemed like Ginny wouldn’t be paired with Harry but I found myself to enjoy reading it. I still hope hope that Ginny would end up with Harry and Haku since it does not sit right with me for Ginny to be with anyone else and I wish it wouldn’t bother me like it does.
Maybe Ginny and Haku could be bi so it could actually work out and make it possible. Could say that The ice ability could be passed on to children Harry has with both Ginny and Haku. A bit of a reach but that’s what’s so great about fanfiction. Konoha could do some kind of test I’m sure.
I wonder what the next many chapters will be like from here during there time in Konoha and how you plan to have things go for everyone. I can’t wait to find out how things work out and how the fights will go when they come up. I do hope they could at least help gaara be able to have a normal life with a stable seal instead of dying. I always liked gaara and felt bad for him.