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2/19/2008 c3 Aria DeLoncray
Interesting. Can't wait for the next.
2/16/2008 c3 xXPrettyDisturbedXx
sweet
2/15/2008 c3 16Chris St Thomas
style comments

your writing seems a bit simplistic for a 20 year old writing in third person. I mean your ideas a fine, I'm talking about how you construct your sentences and maybe word choice as well.

plot comments

time travel paradox much?

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