for first kiss4/3/2017 c1 
1LalaSparrow
Le dicton tout ce qui est petit est mignon fonctionne très bien avec cett fanfiction. Elle est courte mais mignonne. Bonne continuation
1LalaSparrowLe dicton tout ce qui est petit est mignon fonctionne très bien avec cett fanfiction. Elle est courte mais mignonne. Bonne continuation
4/17/2008 c1 monkey22
tip don't make your stories so short elaberate some make them longer tell what happens after they kiss. How each familily reacted when they found out about it. just a hint but you are a good writer, you have some good ideas.
tip don't make your stories so short elaberate some make them longer tell what happens after they kiss. How each familily reacted when they found out about it. just a hint but you are a good writer, you have some good ideas.
3/11/2008 c1 LadyBethaliz
Aw that was really cute! = )
Aw that was really cute! = )
2/17/2008 c1 18Bloody Violet Heart
Darn it! This was really good! But why did it have to be so short?
So, to make up for that, how about a sequal! huh? huh? Or you could continue this one! What do you think? huh? huh?
18Bloody Violet HeartDarn it! This was really good! But why did it have to be so short?
So, to make up for that, how about a sequal! huh? huh? Or you could continue this one! What do you think? huh? huh?