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7/3/2015 c1 Guest
Loved the Btw, this was a great one-shot. You should totally write more.
7/15/2011 c1 soooiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
niceeeeeeeeeeeeee
7/30/2010 c1 1La Kookie
Ha, that ending was just awesome.
8/16/2009 c1 noopname
Okay, if I get bad grades it will your fault!

I was supposed to read ONE fanfic only, to get my head to think straight again, and I'm on my third!

PSOKSPKS, anyway done with my shouting with myself.

I just LOVE you fanfics, and I realy mean it!

C'mon, I want a Richard like that! *-*

Haha, okay nosense again.

Sorry the errors in the reviews, I'm excited and I'm brazilian soo. xD

I'll just read another one of your fics!

bye!
7/7/2009 c1 Guest
Hey! Adorable story. Sweet, short and fluffy - my favorite! The one thing is, at the end of your first paragraph, I think you call Kori an adulteress. An adulteress is someone that commits adultery, as in cheating on their husband. Is that what you meant? Just a little confused. Anyway, thanks for writing this; I look forward to reading more of your stories! :-)
2/19/2008 c1 15raeXXstarry
That was mega cool! =)
2/18/2008 c1 6Black Raven 13
Cool!
2/18/2008 c1 11cartoonstar
aw, this story is so cute :) little tim and ryan make it so adorable

i loved the way dick and kory met, and i also liked the second day they met up

omg ryan has a big mouth, lol, seriouslyy you just dont shout things like that out in public

the first kiss was done of perfectly, completely awesome :)

i liked the ending, lol tim and ryan are gonna need theropy after that little sighting, but at least they got some good blackmail matrial lol

great story ^_^ loved it
2/18/2008 c1 I'm your Cherry Bomb
Whoa go Kory and Dick!haha lol!

Glad you put in the ending it finished the story nicely!

Very cute one-shot! I loved it! Great Job!

xoxo, Lil-Mz.Sunshine
2/18/2008 c1 2Royal Blue
Look at Star and Rob go! Frisky! Lol.

Great oneshot,

Royal.
2/18/2008 c1 4SuPeR HyPeR chick 101
So cute! LOved it...it was really romantic!
2/18/2008 c1 54Harry Potter Fan 1994
Lol nice...that's EXACTLY what two little boys want to see when they're over at a friend's house, haha.

That was so cute :)

I'm sorry, i have to go, but I just wanted to say that I really liked this one shot!

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