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for Lizzie's worst nightmare

9/18/2014 c9 4laloquita.co
me gusto tu fic pero yo que soy una chica no entiendo el porque ponerse como lizzie francamente yo tenia diez estaba sola en mi casa y lo unico que hice fue buscar una en la gaveta de mi madre y ya no entiendo el drama
igual buen fic
9/10/2012 c9 Rhemzz
Cool thing I love watching life with Derek and the book or scripture is amazing if u did it by ur self them... That's amazing my sitters need to know about dis
11/21/2009 c9 8SuperxXxGirl79
heehee awesome story luv it! o and i h8 puberty 2! worst 10 years of my life... jkjkjkjk!
1/4/2009 c8 9dafuturesingingsensation
Aw. I love Derek/Lizzie sweetness, 'cause I think Lizzie's the stepsister Derek's proud to have. Casey, not so much, but for a different reason. .^

But I really think now, Nora needs to talk seriously to Lizzie, because Lizzie needs to remember that this is something that half the world population has to deal with, and it's nothing to be embarrassed about. And then perhaps Edwin later, to calm her down. EEP! Now I'm giving directions. I'm such an editor. O.o'

Love the Dasey, tho! =D
6/21/2008 c7 14XxKarissaShayexX
Haha, I laughed my way through this whole thing. Update soon!
6/20/2008 c6 9dafuturesingingsensation
It isn't Derek's fault, yet I feel he should do some damage control. Just a thought.

Though it wouldn't be advisable to take the thoughts of someone who writes a review at two in the morning too seriously.
5/17/2008 c5 collsmith
Was he going to tell them? Does he end up telling them? How does Edwin reacts? How do they explain to Marti whats going on?
4/14/2008 c4 MartialArts Writer
That ws exatly what happened to me except I have 7 older brothers.You totally completely rock for making a story about something like that.Except mine was way worse imagine getting the womanhood lecture from 3 of your older brothers while the other 4 danced around like idiotic jackasses not know what to to do.
4/8/2008 c4 dafuturesingingsensation
New reader. Great basis to start a fanfic on. I would never have thought of that.

Priceless dialogue:

"Derek, can I talk to you for a minute in the kitchen?"

"I thought we finished that conversation earlier."

"Derek. Kitchen. Now!"

Keep going! It just occurred to me, how on earth is Edwin going to react?
4/1/2008 c4 justinina
hahahahahahaha!

that was hilarious! every girl should be excited about having their period!
4/1/2008 c4 602Ghostwriter
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
4/1/2008 c4 1boburnhamplease
what the fuck is wrong with you?

why the hell do you write about periods all the times.
2/24/2008 c3 602Ghostwriter
Very interesting. I like it. Catch ya on the flip side.
2/22/2008 c2 4clicksandler12
haha this is awesome update soon I love it
2/20/2008 c2 tpfang56
Good story! I think it's going well so far. But there a few things bugging me. One, is that you have a few run-ons. As in your forgetting a few commas and periods(no pun intended), it's all very grammatical. Two, is that your using too many !'s. It's kind of annoying(no offense), but you don't need that many.

Sorry for being a critic, but I hope you update soon.
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