for Our City's Finest4/12/2009 c1 
1Ismenian
I approve! But I would've thought he'd head right back for his wife to keep her safe instead of going about...
1IsmenianI approve! But I would've thought he'd head right back for his wife to keep her safe instead of going about...
3/1/2008 c1 stilldemented
That's sad that only 4 people have read this fic. It's better than a lot of the Resident Evil fics I've read. Something you should work on is detail. You have a rushed way of dealing with things throughout the fic, but maybe that's just your writing style.
Overall for a fanfic it is really good. If you don't continue this project...well that's your decision, but I will be EXTREMELY dissapointed if you discontinue it.
That's sad that only 4 people have read this fic. It's better than a lot of the Resident Evil fics I've read. Something you should work on is detail. You have a rushed way of dealing with things throughout the fic, but maybe that's just your writing style.
Overall for a fanfic it is really good. If you don't continue this project...well that's your decision, but I will be EXTREMELY dissapointed if you discontinue it.
2/28/2008 c1 Cody7799
I love it. PLEASE CONTINUE!
I love it. PLEASE CONTINUE!