for MY DEAR GIRL3/18/2008 c7 
189YenGirl
You are killing me! Now that Zero is gone, you tell me he used to play the guitar? *spaces out picturing Zero strumming away with that silver hair falling over his eyes* drool...
I like that Yuuki is starting to get on well with Aido & Kain... they're not all bad guys really.
Oops... Kaname-sama is angry, wonder what he'll do!
Please continue!
189YenGirlYou are killing me! Now that Zero is gone, you tell me he used to play the guitar? *spaces out picturing Zero strumming away with that silver hair falling over his eyes* drool...
I like that Yuuki is starting to get on well with Aido & Kain... they're not all bad guys really.
Oops... Kaname-sama is angry, wonder what he'll do!
Please continue!
3/18/2008 c7 Skylea
Heehee cutee! Interesting way to start and end a chapter haha ticked Kaname:) Would like to see the next chapter soon!
Heehee cutee! Interesting way to start and end a chapter haha ticked Kaname:) Would like to see the next chapter soon!
3/18/2008 c7 48xxpatixx
love that song who sings it? will i also love this chapter^^ it was soo awsome.. i so wnat to see what happens next update asap^^
48xxpatixxlove that song who sings it? will i also love this chapter^^ it was soo awsome.. i so wnat to see what happens next update asap^^
3/12/2008 c2 3kingdomheartsgirl777
did you know that she is a vampire and kaname is her older borther you fined out in the 7 or 8 manga.
3kingdomheartsgirl777did you know that she is a vampire and kaname is her older borther you fined out in the 7 or 8 manga.
3/11/2008 c6 189YenGirl
LOL, Kain was so cute, wanting to see Yuuki's fangs!
Ah, sweet Kaname... good thing you didn't fall asleep in Yuuki's bed, huh... *wink*
Can someone throw Sara out of Cross Academy? *waves hand wildly in air, shouting 'Me, pick me!'*
189YenGirlLOL, Kain was so cute, wanting to see Yuuki's fangs!
Ah, sweet Kaname... good thing you didn't fall asleep in Yuuki's bed, huh... *wink*
Can someone throw Sara out of Cross Academy? *waves hand wildly in air, shouting 'Me, pick me!'*
3/10/2008 c6 8Zaiaku Dyuu
*hiss* once again I'm saying this: DIE SARA! Wow, I lost track of how many times I've said that... but moving on in life GREAT chapter! I hope that you can update soon!
8Zaiaku Dyuu*hiss* once again I'm saying this: DIE SARA! Wow, I lost track of how many times I've said that... but moving on in life GREAT chapter! I hope that you can update soon!
3/7/2008 c2 2panicatthediscotime
Some more advice. (sorry. You're a real good writer. Just some ploshing up.) Ok When Yuki is talking and the chairman says "MOMMY MISSED YOU!" and she said " I didn't go anywhere." do this.
"Mommy was so worried!" Said the chairman running to his daughter, giving her a death hug. Yuki gasped for air in his embrace.
"But I didn't go anywhere." She said.
And one more thing. The point of view. Do the line thing.
2panicatthediscotimeSome more advice. (sorry. You're a real good writer. Just some ploshing up.) Ok When Yuki is talking and the chairman says "MOMMY MISSED YOU!" and she said " I didn't go anywhere." do this.
"Mommy was so worried!" Said the chairman running to his daughter, giving her a death hug. Yuki gasped for air in his embrace.
"But I didn't go anywhere." She said.
And one more thing. The point of view. Do the line thing.
3/7/2008 c1 panicatthediscotime
words of advice. Don't cut off the sentances. Keep them going. And the point of veiw. I would cut it out. Like combine it. But a really good job!
words of advice. Don't cut off the sentances. Keep them going. And the point of veiw. I would cut it out. Like combine it. But a really good job!