4/11/2015 c9 Guest
I have a very wild imagination o.o
I have a very wild imagination o.o
7/11/2014 c9 Guest
Dude this is the SHITTIEST chapter ever! So dont get a job as an author anytime soon
Dude this is the SHITTIEST chapter ever! So dont get a job as an author anytime soon
3/24/2013 c10 death star
Omg I think I am sobbing! That was BEAUTIFUL!
Omg I think I am sobbing! That was BEAUTIFUL!
4/22/2012 c12 Torn.Diary
aww...this is really cute. I hope you would continue with these oneshot! love!
aww...this is really cute. I hope you would continue with these oneshot! love!
11/6/2010 c12 4lovefromyourginger
that was actually really good. the steamy part wasnt too steamy, in fact, it was ...dare i say it?... perfect. you didnt make it sound nasty but u also didnt make it sound like a trashy romance novel. im proud! heheh. a couple songs i think would be good are "I Could Not Ask For More" by Sara Evans i believe, and "I Wanna Make You Close Your Eyes" by Dierks Bentley. just a thought, u should check them out. i really like it when you do Fang's POV.
update soon plz!
}K{
that was actually really good. the steamy part wasnt too steamy, in fact, it was ...dare i say it?... perfect. you didnt make it sound nasty but u also didnt make it sound like a trashy romance novel. im proud! heheh. a couple songs i think would be good are "I Could Not Ask For More" by Sara Evans i believe, and "I Wanna Make You Close Your Eyes" by Dierks Bentley. just a thought, u should check them out. i really like it when you do Fang's POV.
update soon plz!
}K{
5/28/2010 c12 solosinger1
You are a very creative writer. I have an idea. Maybe you could write a story more humor in it? Humor and Teasing. I like that. Keep it a little less "steamy" as you call it.
You are a very creative writer. I have an idea. Maybe you could write a story more humor in it? Humor and Teasing. I like that. Keep it a little less "steamy" as you call it.
4/12/2010 c11 KayKayMarie75
OH MY GOSH! you are such an amzing writer! and the fax in these chapters was awesome! totally like my favroite fanfic. nice job(:
OH MY GOSH! you are such an amzing writer! and the fax in these chapters was awesome! totally like my favroite fanfic. nice job(:
10/3/2009 c1 j
good story, nice title. My brain is way more messed up.
Pinata aient me';ell.
figure that out and you'll be a genius.
good story, nice title. My brain is way more messed up.
Pinata aient me';ell.
figure that out and you'll be a genius.
9/23/2008 c12 meghan
Girl U r AMAZING! U BETTER NOT KEEP US WAITING FOR THE NEXT COUPLE OF CHAPTERS!
Girl U r AMAZING! U BETTER NOT KEEP US WAITING FOR THE NEXT COUPLE OF CHAPTERS!
9/22/2008 c9 ok
that was so amazing
sorry i dont have any ctitique, but it was so good
that was so amazing
sorry i dont have any ctitique, but it was so good
9/22/2008 c1 ok
all's fair in love and war
i loved that part
great use of the title
all's fair in love and war
i loved that part
great use of the title
7/27/2008 c12 13Blanco Pagina
It was random, but it was also really sweet! Nice job, hon! I liked it. :) Nice teen romance without getting too dirty.
I would squee a bit more, but I need to go to bed...I was going through my inbox and found this, and thought I should R&R. Write another!
Lovies!
Bub'les
It was random, but it was also really sweet! Nice job, hon! I liked it. :) Nice teen romance without getting too dirty.
I would squee a bit more, but I need to go to bed...I was going through my inbox and found this, and thought I should R&R. Write another!
Lovies!
Bub'les