for Will and the Genie of the Necklace10/4/2010 c1 love me love me not
awwwwwwwwwwwww i luv this
awwwwwwwwwwwww i luv this
5/3/2010 c1 
4ayanamifaerudo
Please, please continue this story. I loVe it! Great story!
Please continue!
4ayanamifaerudoPlease, please continue this story. I loVe it! Great story!
Please continue!
5/22/2009 c1 636yellow 14
Thought I'd already reviewed this earlier, sorry.
A cute little fic XV. Keep writing
636yellow 14Thought I'd already reviewed this earlier, sorry.
A cute little fic XV. Keep writing
4/12/2009 c1 Zivaswords
Omg this story is the best ! I love it so much :)
Caleb is soo sweet and the genie too :)
Good job :)
Omg this story is the best ! I love it so much :)
Caleb is soo sweet and the genie too :)
Good job :)
3/7/2009 c1 1lost prince
Really nice and sweet story, liked how it moved on and ended. Don't know why I didnt read it before.
Will see what else I missed.
1lost princeReally nice and sweet story, liked how it moved on and ended. Don't know why I didnt read it before.
Will see what else I missed.
12/17/2008 c1 Coldsoul1315
I thought it was a good story. I think you should make more. Keep up the good work with your stories
I thought it was a good story. I think you should make more. Keep up the good work with your stories
8/3/2008 c1 40ThePink1 at Reefside.Net
I can't believe I didn't read this one when you first posted it. This was FANTASTIC, XV! Catch ya on the flipside, so don't get caught in the downslide, A J.
40ThePink1 at Reefside.NetI can't believe I didn't read this one when you first posted it. This was FANTASTIC, XV! Catch ya on the flipside, so don't get caught in the downslide, A J.
4/10/2008 c1 2BlackRoseFire
Damn...That was really awesome. I really enjoyed it. Please continue to write.
2BlackRoseFireDamn...That was really awesome. I really enjoyed it. Please continue to write.
2/27/2008 c1 28Karon19
It's a nice story, XV, but I'd really like to see you branch out some more. All your stories revolve around a troubled Will who's rescued by Susan in some shape or form. I felt like I've read this story a dozen times already. Not that I didn't like the genie twist. That was original.
I know a couple of reviewers pointed this out already but there were quite a few spelling errors. A writer who has improved as much as you (and I know) have should be wary of this.
All this is coming from a friend. Do not let it dishearten you but part of being your friend and beta is letting you know where and what you can improve on.
Knight
28Karon19It's a nice story, XV, but I'd really like to see you branch out some more. All your stories revolve around a troubled Will who's rescued by Susan in some shape or form. I felt like I've read this story a dozen times already. Not that I didn't like the genie twist. That was original.
I know a couple of reviewers pointed this out already but there were quite a few spelling errors. A writer who has improved as much as you (and I know) have should be wary of this.
All this is coming from a friend. Do not let it dishearten you but part of being your friend and beta is letting you know where and what you can improve on.
Knight
2/27/2008 c1 6RachelJhoson
well this story, im not flaming or acusing you but its really similar to a story i posted some months ago, actually i a cxc writer so instead of Will i turned cornelia into an ophan, the owner of the orphanage dosent like her just like in your story, and the prphans neither
i was also going to turn will into her enemy too...
again im not saying you had copy me, cause the idea of the necklake and the gennie its completly diofferent
but..uh have you read my story?
please reply
R.J
6RachelJhosonwell this story, im not flaming or acusing you but its really similar to a story i posted some months ago, actually i a cxc writer so instead of Will i turned cornelia into an ophan, the owner of the orphanage dosent like her just like in your story, and the prphans neither
i was also going to turn will into her enemy too...
again im not saying you had copy me, cause the idea of the necklake and the gennie its completly diofferent
but..uh have you read my story?
please reply
R.J
2/27/2008 c1 4shocklance
Nice story, I really enjoyed it! I liked how you turned the Heart of Kandrakar into a genie lamp, that was pretty cool. I loved how genie Susan kept smacking people around that were creul to Will, it was good for a laugh! All and all, a good job!
4shocklanceNice story, I really enjoyed it! I liked how you turned the Heart of Kandrakar into a genie lamp, that was pretty cool. I loved how genie Susan kept smacking people around that were creul to Will, it was good for a laugh! All and all, a good job!