for WHEN DID HE 18/9/2008 c1 Dysphemisms
I love this story so far. The characters are great and you have then keeping in with how they would be on the show.
I have one little gripe though. When you change character perspective could you separate it with a line or an extra space becuase it's really discombobulating they way you have written it, it's like whiplash!
Good work otherwise! I can't wait to read more.
I love this story so far. The characters are great and you have then keeping in with how they would be on the show.
I have one little gripe though. When you change character perspective could you separate it with a line or an extra space becuase it's really discombobulating they way you have written it, it's like whiplash!
Good work otherwise! I can't wait to read more.
7/12/2008 c13 
39WIWJ
Thanks for putting it all together! I added it to the C2. That makes two of your stories! Congrats! Keep writing I love this story.
lori
39WIWJThanks for putting it all together! I added it to the C2. That makes two of your stories! Congrats! Keep writing I love this story.
lori
7/12/2008 c13 bovary
Bosco is so lovely in this chapter, wanting Faith to be herself before beginning a new relationship...
A short but sweet chapter
Bosco is so lovely in this chapter, wanting Faith to be herself before beginning a new relationship...
A short but sweet chapter
6/19/2008 c3 bulletproofweeks
Now, THAT is an unexpected twist, but plausible. Work is definitely going to be awkward now. Ty too. HAHA, lol.
Now, THAT is an unexpected twist, but plausible. Work is definitely going to be awkward now. Ty too. HAHA, lol.
3/18/2008 c10 7SirenJunkie
I was just thinking about your story when the update came to my inbox. Haha.
I love this chapter, i'm so anxious to see what happens next!
Keep up the great writing.
7SirenJunkieI was just thinking about your story when the update came to my inbox. Haha.
I love this chapter, i'm so anxious to see what happens next!
Keep up the great writing.
3/7/2008 c9 7kimtom4eva
That's funny, I can't wait to see what Bosco does next. I hope he makes his move soon!
7kimtom4evaThat's funny, I can't wait to see what Bosco does next. I hope he makes his move soon!
3/7/2008 c9 7SirenJunkie
Swet Chapter!
Vinnie's living dangerously, I would worry about Bosco shooting me if I was him. Haha.
And you also keep updating, which is great cause i'm really into the story. I should try to do the same...
Anyways, good work, thanks for sharing!
7SirenJunkieSwet Chapter!
Vinnie's living dangerously, I would worry about Bosco shooting me if I was him. Haha.
And you also keep updating, which is great cause i'm really into the story. I should try to do the same...
Anyways, good work, thanks for sharing!
3/4/2008 c8 7kimtom4eva
So Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile, I've been so busy with work I've had to catch up on my reading. Your doing a great job portraying all the relationships in this story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
7kimtom4evaSo Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile, I've been so busy with work I've had to catch up on my reading. Your doing a great job portraying all the relationships in this story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
3/3/2008 c7 7SirenJunkie
I'm pretty impressed, your chapters just keep getting better. I personally have such a hard time writing dialogue, but in your stories I can always just see the characters and know that what you write is exactly what they'd say. Plus the twists and turns make it pretty enjoyable. Great job on this chapter, I will be eagerly anticipating the next!
7SirenJunkieI'm pretty impressed, your chapters just keep getting better. I personally have such a hard time writing dialogue, but in your stories I can always just see the characters and know that what you write is exactly what they'd say. Plus the twists and turns make it pretty enjoyable. Great job on this chapter, I will be eagerly anticipating the next!