for Ambidextrous3/26/2008 c5 
1Miss Kitty Chevious
Ok. I think I can deal with that. Love how you started and ended the story with the same phrase! It's always fun to see similar ideas when things flip. You've got amazing control of the characters, not for a second did it feel like they where out of character! And you got the chapter out so quickly! :) Remembe to sleep sometimes! Keep it up!
1Miss Kitty CheviousOk. I think I can deal with that. Love how you started and ended the story with the same phrase! It's always fun to see similar ideas when things flip. You've got amazing control of the characters, not for a second did it feel like they where out of character! And you got the chapter out so quickly! :) Remembe to sleep sometimes! Keep it up!
3/26/2008 c5 1grahamsmoon
Why should we be mad? It’s a good story, well written, and I like the plot.
1grahamsmoonWhy should we be mad? It’s a good story, well written, and I like the plot.
3/26/2008 c5 36fanficismything
FINALLY!
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Only took him... a very long time XD I van't wait for more XD
36fanficismythingFINALLY!
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Only took him... a very long time XD I van't wait for more XD
3/26/2008 c5 beppin14
$*&*(")"()!
OMYGOSH! EE~~ :D:D:D:D
That was a great chapter! Impatiently waiting for more~ =P
$*&*(")"()!
OMYGOSH! EE~~ :D:D:D:D
That was a great chapter! Impatiently waiting for more~ =P
3/26/2008 c5 2Maskelle
You got me hooked on your story and I didn´t even read or watch Tsubasa chronicle completly. Loved it and can´t wait to find out what happens next!
2MaskelleYou got me hooked on your story and I didn´t even read or watch Tsubasa chronicle completly. Loved it and can´t wait to find out what happens next!
3/25/2008 c4 1Miss Kitty Chevious
Whoa. That was just... whoa. Talk about a twist! Nice contiueing the plotline, you underestimate we fangirls, it's more the anticipation of the act than the act itself that gets us going! I'm not too sure about this new character, I haven't seen too many additional characters in stories work as seemlessly and well as just the original cast. But, she looks like she'll be interesting, I'll give her a chance. For the record, I'm not a cheerleader, I dance for a living! ;) But I'm still rooting for you!
1Miss Kitty CheviousWhoa. That was just... whoa. Talk about a twist! Nice contiueing the plotline, you underestimate we fangirls, it's more the anticipation of the act than the act itself that gets us going! I'm not too sure about this new character, I haven't seen too many additional characters in stories work as seemlessly and well as just the original cast. But, she looks like she'll be interesting, I'll give her a chance. For the record, I'm not a cheerleader, I dance for a living! ;) But I'm still rooting for you!
3/23/2008 c4 19Morena Evensong
Wow, okay, definitely NOT what I was expecting. Which is probably good, since it means you're not being predictable. I most definitely can't wait to find out more.
19Morena EvensongWow, okay, definitely NOT what I was expecting. Which is probably good, since it means you're not being predictable. I most definitely can't wait to find out more.
3/23/2008 c4 beppin14
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Oh noes! I just read your story, and it's GREAT! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Oh noes! I just read your story, and it's GREAT! I can't wait to see what happens next!
3/23/2008 c4 1Taisean
WOW! When you said plottier version you weren't kidding around! I certainly didn't see that coming. I am terribly curious about Tsukiakari (beautiful name btw) but will wait till you write a bit more about her. It was genius of you to have Fay contact her using Chii's magic instead of his. Keep up the good work!
1TaiseanWOW! When you said plottier version you weren't kidding around! I certainly didn't see that coming. I am terribly curious about Tsukiakari (beautiful name btw) but will wait till you write a bit more about her. It was genius of you to have Fay contact her using Chii's magic instead of his. Keep up the good work!
3/22/2008 c4 Alasforme
...To be perfectly honest, Fai having a fiancee seems pretty OOC to me. Considering his past and what he knew he'd someday have to do, it's hard to believe he'd let himself be that close to someone, especially enough for get engaged and/or have sex with them. And if he did, he doesn't seem like the kind of guy to cheat.
But then she was just introduced, so I'll wait to see what you do with her. Her odd colouring when there's no indication that it's common in Celes seems kinna Mary-Sueish, but as I said, I'll wait and see how you handle it. Hopefully Fai's reasons will be explained and I'll trust you to do it ^_^
...To be perfectly honest, Fai having a fiancee seems pretty OOC to me. Considering his past and what he knew he'd someday have to do, it's hard to believe he'd let himself be that close to someone, especially enough for get engaged and/or have sex with them. And if he did, he doesn't seem like the kind of guy to cheat.
But then she was just introduced, so I'll wait to see what you do with her. Her odd colouring when there's no indication that it's common in Celes seems kinna Mary-Sueish, but as I said, I'll wait and see how you handle it. Hopefully Fai's reasons will be explained and I'll trust you to do it ^_^
3/22/2008 c4 2nia-cchi
Uwa~! a fiancee? oh that reminds me of this idea for a fanfic i came up with like, 2 years ago. Of course it was back when i was a little girl who knew nothing of yaoi or shounen-ai so it wasn't a KuroFai one but Fai did have a fiancee.
2nia-cchiUwa~! a fiancee? oh that reminds me of this idea for a fanfic i came up with like, 2 years ago. Of course it was back when i was a little girl who knew nothing of yaoi or shounen-ai so it wasn't a KuroFai one but Fai did have a fiancee.
3/21/2008 c4 Hakiri-Nefertiri
eh? he's what?
Fai and a girl doesn't compute in my head...i'm sorry...but i have hope for KuroFai! Write on! Write on!
eh? he's what?
Fai and a girl doesn't compute in my head...i'm sorry...but i have hope for KuroFai! Write on! Write on!