9/26/2008 c10 19Kitsune Tanaka
YAY! Real sex! Although, reading it while listening to Brooks & Dunn is a little awkward.
YAY! Real sex! Although, reading it while listening to Brooks & Dunn is a little awkward.
9/26/2008 c3 Kitsune Tanaka
In the scanlation I read, she spoke his true name as "Youou" which they said means Hawk King. Makes sense to me. I also don't think that Kurogane is his last name, but more like an alias. Ya know? Does that make sense?
*is tired*
And I know that this is complete, but I vote for reason one. Bring on the smut!
In the scanlation I read, she spoke his true name as "Youou" which they said means Hawk King. Makes sense to me. I also don't think that Kurogane is his last name, but more like an alias. Ya know? Does that make sense?
*is tired*
And I know that this is complete, but I vote for reason one. Bring on the smut!
9/25/2008 c1 Kitsune Tanaka
Daymn.
If I'm late for work tomorrow, can I tell my boss that I was up reading your marvelous work? *is torn between sleep and reading*
Daymn.
If I'm late for work tomorrow, can I tell my boss that I was up reading your marvelous work? *is torn between sleep and reading*
8/25/2008 c10 3Kage no Nikko
Wowie...It's very nice, although you sort of could've made it more...angsty.
Write more, though... Going to read your other ficcies.
Ja!
Wowie...It's very nice, although you sort of could've made it more...angsty.
Write more, though... Going to read your other ficcies.
Ja!
8/14/2008 c2 Hai-Purisu
...wow xD
Well, Fay IS hard to draw, I've done a drawing of him last year and he ended up looking emo ==
...wow xD
Well, Fay IS hard to draw, I've done a drawing of him last year and he ended up looking emo ==
8/3/2008 c9 Kage-rin
ooh! The plot thickens. Kuro-chu is 23 while Fai is a mere 15? Damn. Didn't see that coming... That means Sakura and Syaoran are older than him! Gasp!
Wow, hold old are they in the manga anyway?
ooh! The plot thickens. Kuro-chu is 23 while Fai is a mere 15? Damn. Didn't see that coming... That means Sakura and Syaoran are older than him! Gasp!
Wow, hold old are they in the manga anyway?
8/2/2008 c1 Jaime
You are amazing. I luff you lol. Kuro-tan has no gag reflex! weird... Ya, I have no clue what to put here... You're supposed to put constructive criticism or whatever, but I think this is fine how it is =]
You are amazing. I luff you lol. Kuro-tan has no gag reflex! weird... Ya, I have no clue what to put here... You're supposed to put constructive criticism or whatever, but I think this is fine how it is =]
7/31/2008 c1 5lil-Vixen24
lol yea he has major skillz XD i like this story! ima read the next chapter! woot!
lol yea he has major skillz XD i like this story! ima read the next chapter! woot!
7/31/2008 c10 35twiinklestar
Amazing. Incredible. Absolutely magnificent. I would copy and paste a whole thesaurus' worth of synonyms for the word good but my computer is slow and I don't want it to freeze. I need to read your sequel of course ;) That was incredible. I love the humor and the end. And thank the Gods that Fai technically isn't 15. It's just cause his country is queer and has a retarted amount of days in a year. FANTASTIC JOB! I loved it. And I'm pretty sure I already added it to my favs.
Amazing. Incredible. Absolutely magnificent. I would copy and paste a whole thesaurus' worth of synonyms for the word good but my computer is slow and I don't want it to freeze. I need to read your sequel of course ;) That was incredible. I love the humor and the end. And thank the Gods that Fai technically isn't 15. It's just cause his country is queer and has a retarted amount of days in a year. FANTASTIC JOB! I loved it. And I'm pretty sure I already added it to my favs.
7/31/2008 c9 twiinklestar
-Sits, staring at computer screen, mouth agape- O.O :O O.O :O OH. MY. GOODNESS. O.O -blinks repeadidly- I don't even know what to say. Bu- he- they- what? 15! Are you friggen serious. -swallows- Oh my gosh. That was so unexpected. I can't believe... He's what! -twiink tells herself to breath- Um.. well.. I'm so at loss for words right now.. I think I'll just continue reading. -gulps, breathes, blinks and shivvers- Strange..
-Sits, staring at computer screen, mouth agape- O.O :O O.O :O OH. MY. GOODNESS. O.O -blinks repeadidly- I don't even know what to say. Bu- he- they- what? 15! Are you friggen serious. -swallows- Oh my gosh. That was so unexpected. I can't believe... He's what! -twiink tells herself to breath- Um.. well.. I'm so at loss for words right now.. I think I'll just continue reading. -gulps, breathes, blinks and shivvers- Strange..
7/31/2008 c8 twiinklestar
Aw, incredibly kawaii. I LOVE IT. Wow, I thought the ending was halfway through this chapter. Then I thought it was at the end of this chapter but now there's another chapter.
Aw, incredibly kawaii. I LOVE IT. Wow, I thought the ending was halfway through this chapter. Then I thought it was at the end of this chapter but now there's another chapter.
7/31/2008 c7 twiinklestar
Teehehe, NEVER! I HATE YOU TSUKIAKARI! GAH! Yay Fai. HOW DARE SHE TELL HIM TO STAY AWAY FROM FAI. WHY I OUTTA!
TEAM KUROGANE!
(GO SAKURA)
Teehehe, NEVER! I HATE YOU TSUKIAKARI! GAH! Yay Fai. HOW DARE SHE TELL HIM TO STAY AWAY FROM FAI. WHY I OUTTA!
TEAM KUROGANE!
(GO SAKURA)