7/31/2008 c5 35twiinklestar
I've decided to review here. First of all because I think this was the best chapter yet. My reasons:
1.) I think that 'glomping' is the most halarious word/thing in the world. The fact that his fiancee (GR) glomped Fai was very entertaining. I almost laughed out loud, but then I realized that it was 12:30 and my family is sleeping.
2.) I absolutely adore Sakura's attitude towards the situation. I'm so happy that there is someone to push that BEEP away from Fai. So glad that she understands. If I were her, I'd do the same. The sudden burst of courage, bluntness and her smiling facade makes me so proud.
3.) I also adored Sakura's little conversation with Syaoran. The one about loving someone with all your heart. I thought it was so kawaii.
4.) Kurogane is jealous! You don't get to see that much. And even if he doesn't realize it yet, he is so jelling. I find it charming.
and last but definately not least; 5.) FAI TOLD KURO-RIIN THAT HE LOVED HIM! HIP HIP HURRAY! My life has now been fulfilled. Oh Fai how I love you so. FaixKurogane is my ultimate favorite pairing.
I think that the personnalities of each and every character in this story is so perfect. They are all amazing. Fantastic job.
PS: Aw @ Kuro trying to be 'romantic'. .. I thought it was romantic :$
Off to the next chappie! ( :
I've decided to review here. First of all because I think this was the best chapter yet. My reasons:
1.) I think that 'glomping' is the most halarious word/thing in the world. The fact that his fiancee (GR) glomped Fai was very entertaining. I almost laughed out loud, but then I realized that it was 12:30 and my family is sleeping.
2.) I absolutely adore Sakura's attitude towards the situation. I'm so happy that there is someone to push that BEEP away from Fai. So glad that she understands. If I were her, I'd do the same. The sudden burst of courage, bluntness and her smiling facade makes me so proud.
3.) I also adored Sakura's little conversation with Syaoran. The one about loving someone with all your heart. I thought it was so kawaii.
4.) Kurogane is jealous! You don't get to see that much. And even if he doesn't realize it yet, he is so jelling. I find it charming.
and last but definately not least; 5.) FAI TOLD KURO-RIIN THAT HE LOVED HIM! HIP HIP HURRAY! My life has now been fulfilled. Oh Fai how I love you so. FaixKurogane is my ultimate favorite pairing.
I think that the personnalities of each and every character in this story is so perfect. They are all amazing. Fantastic job.
PS: Aw @ Kuro trying to be 'romantic'. .. I thought it was romantic :$
Off to the next chappie! ( :
7/13/2008 c8 NostalgiaS
oo.. Do you mean " Aijou" ? I might be wrong.. but I don't recall hearing " Aigyo" or seeing it in a dictionary ever before.. @@ But that's just me and my Japanese thingy.. I get annoyed when stuff doesn't have the proper Romanji to Hiragana thingies.. Sorry for the rant!
oo.. Do you mean " Aijou" ? I might be wrong.. but I don't recall hearing " Aigyo" or seeing it in a dictionary ever before.. @@ But that's just me and my Japanese thingy.. I get annoyed when stuff doesn't have the proper Romanji to Hiragana thingies.. Sorry for the rant!
7/10/2008 c10 izzy
oh God im still blushing how cute!
oh God im still blushing how cute!
7/3/2008 c10 14Claire Lanser
i should of read this before reading 'where the heart is' but i love it all the same!
i should of read this before reading 'where the heart is' but i love it all the same!
6/12/2008 c9 21Leki
I wasn't going to review until the last chapter I read, but this deserved a review. Fai is only 15? XD That was an unexpected and hilarious twist. XD
I wasn't going to review until the last chapter I read, but this deserved a review. Fai is only 15? XD That was an unexpected and hilarious twist. XD
6/9/2008 c9 4thriving-nights
I'm reading through, and saw your a/n: about how you won't translate futomara. So what do I do? I go and look it up in my japanese dictionary.. I gotta say, you made Fay /really/ damn bold there. Thanks for a good laugh. I actually fell over ~^^~
~Amic
I'm reading through, and saw your a/n: about how you won't translate futomara. So what do I do? I go and look it up in my japanese dictionary.. I gotta say, you made Fay /really/ damn bold there. Thanks for a good laugh. I actually fell over ~^^~
~Amic
5/23/2008 c1 1meiyo-chan
omg~ this is good...
i cold almost see the expression on kuroganes face when he knew about faye being 15...lol..that was so good...
smut is SO against my values, NOT...so if you'll excuse me, i'll go fnd the sequel and wish there was more smut and smexxy-ness of kurofay there until i pass out from a major nosebleed...XD
so~ GOODWORK and Please KEEP IT UP this is really good~
omg~ this is good...
i cold almost see the expression on kuroganes face when he knew about faye being 15...lol..that was so good...
smut is SO against my values, NOT...so if you'll excuse me, i'll go fnd the sequel and wish there was more smut and smexxy-ness of kurofay there until i pass out from a major nosebleed...XD
so~ GOODWORK and Please KEEP IT UP this is really good~
5/21/2008 c10 4TheRealMapleSyrup
I laughed a lot reading this and i really liked it!
I have to read the sequel now... ^_^
I laughed a lot reading this and i really liked it!
I have to read the sequel now... ^_^
5/21/2008 c10 1Akira Muratake
Omg... that was... wow... uh... don't have a word to describe this... this is damn good yaoi... going to read sequel now...
Omg... that was... wow... uh... don't have a word to describe this... this is damn good yaoi... going to read sequel now...
5/14/2008 c10 xmeix
Wonderful! You write very well. Seriously. The story is really creative and entertaining, also! The sex scene was very steamy in this chapter, I thought I felt a nosebleed approaching X3 Can't wait to read the sequel! I think I'll go check it out now _
Wonderful! You write very well. Seriously. The story is really creative and entertaining, also! The sex scene was very steamy in this chapter, I thought I felt a nosebleed approaching X3 Can't wait to read the sequel! I think I'll go check it out now _
5/12/2008 c10 12vicious-kitsune
I fell behind with reading this. Although at least this way I didn't have to wait to find out what would happen after Fai revealed he was 15.
I had a feeling there would be something that made Fai older than 15 and I'm so very glad there was. I'll be sure to check out the sequel at some point.
I fell behind with reading this. Although at least this way I didn't have to wait to find out what would happen after Fai revealed he was 15.
I had a feeling there would be something that made Fai older than 15 and I'm so very glad there was. I'll be sure to check out the sequel at some point.