5/10/2008 c10 9Emi1988
aw so sweet, even with the smut. I liked this whole story though your paragraph formating got irritating to read.
aw so sweet, even with the smut. I liked this whole story though your paragraph formating got irritating to read.
5/10/2008 c10 1NekokoCella
i liked the sex scene! it was...sticky! HAHA! thank you! i love this story!
i liked the sex scene! it was...sticky! HAHA! thank you! i love this story!
5/10/2008 c10 1Taisean
GAH that is a LOT of days in a year! could you imagine going to school or waiting for holidays and such? Great story, I can't wait to get started reading the sequel (will do it in the morning). I thought the sex was very intense and well described, I enjoyed reading it much. I am glad that you left that but of mistrust there for something for the sequel to go on. I'll review more in the sequel :)
GAH that is a LOT of days in a year! could you imagine going to school or waiting for holidays and such? Great story, I can't wait to get started reading the sequel (will do it in the morning). I thought the sex was very intense and well described, I enjoyed reading it much. I am glad that you left that but of mistrust there for something for the sequel to go on. I'll review more in the sequel :)
5/9/2008 c10 Hakiri-Nefertiri
I love you XD
That was wonderful, and a really LONG sex scene. o.o my brain couldn't handle so much smex at once...or maybe i have to be in the mood to read it as well..ah well, i'll go see that sequel now. Thanks. I'm glad you finished this one! Congratulations!
and haha, Kuro and Fai had the amount of days wrong. I expected it.
I love you XD
That was wonderful, and a really LONG sex scene. o.o my brain couldn't handle so much smex at once...or maybe i have to be in the mood to read it as well..ah well, i'll go see that sequel now. Thanks. I'm glad you finished this one! Congratulations!
and haha, Kuro and Fai had the amount of days wrong. I expected it.
5/9/2008 c10 19Morena Evensong
Awesome chapter! The resolution to Kurogane's 'age difference issue' was hillarious. Of course there are 1,095 or whatever day in a year... LOL! And Syaoran and Sakura were so cute in this- especially Sakura refusing to talk to them until they made up. She would do that. So really the two of them had no choice but to have hot sex, because no one can live without talking to Sakura.
Will definitely check out the sequel once I've had some sleep.
Awesome chapter! The resolution to Kurogane's 'age difference issue' was hillarious. Of course there are 1,095 or whatever day in a year... LOL! And Syaoran and Sakura were so cute in this- especially Sakura refusing to talk to them until they made up. She would do that. So really the two of them had no choice but to have hot sex, because no one can live without talking to Sakura.
Will definitely check out the sequel once I've had some sleep.
5/9/2008 c10 2Maskelle
Oh, that was one hot ending chapter. I´m really curious about the chapter and if they ever solve there trust thing. Loved it and thank you for writing it!
Oh, that was one hot ending chapter. I´m really curious about the chapter and if they ever solve there trust thing. Loved it and thank you for writing it!
5/9/2008 c10 KuroFai-Fangirl18
This last chapter was really good. I knew there'd be some crazy reason Fai was 15. No way in hell he was a normal person's 15. This was great!*scurries of to read the sequel!*
This last chapter was really good. I knew there'd be some crazy reason Fai was 15. No way in hell he was a normal person's 15. This was great!*scurries of to read the sequel!*
5/9/2008 c10 36fanficismything
I know i's a little weird to say a lemon is cute, but this chapter was unbeliveably fluffy XD I totally love it and if there already wasn't a seqeul, I wouls grovel for one XD I love this story so much XD XD But I have to say, if I saw Fai groping Kurogane, I'd probably pass out fro blood loss /
I know i's a little weird to say a lemon is cute, but this chapter was unbeliveably fluffy XD I totally love it and if there already wasn't a seqeul, I wouls grovel for one XD I love this story so much XD XD But I have to say, if I saw Fai groping Kurogane, I'd probably pass out fro blood loss /
5/9/2008 c10 7shadowX101
k..YAY! I WILL HAVE TO READ THE NEW STORY LATER RITE NOW I HAVE TO FINISH GETTING READY FOR SCHOOL! BUT IT WAS AWESOME!
k..YAY! I WILL HAVE TO READ THE NEW STORY LATER RITE NOW I HAVE TO FINISH GETTING READY FOR SCHOOL! BUT IT WAS AWESOME!
5/8/2008 c9 1shongnom
oh gawd haha i love this story. caveman kurogane hahaha . and he's only 15? that..just killed the mood
oh gawd haha i love this story. caveman kurogane hahaha . and he's only 15? that..just killed the mood
5/6/2008 c9 7shadowX101
...um wow...AWESOME! FAYS ONLY ! THAT IS SO AWESOME! MAN I SO CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER^^! PLS O PLS HURRY!
...um wow...AWESOME! FAYS ONLY ! THAT IS SO AWESOME! MAN I SO CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER^^! PLS O PLS HURRY!
5/6/2008 c9 29DXM Junkie
Well what a great time to add THAT revalation! Lol, in reality Fai is hundreds of years older than Kurogane.
Well what a great time to add THAT revalation! Lol, in reality Fai is hundreds of years older than Kurogane.
5/6/2008 c4 DXM Junkie
Why doesnt like Fai like Kurogane to say his name? Is it because Fai is really Yuuri?
Why doesnt like Fai like Kurogane to say his name? Is it because Fai is really Yuuri?