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2swordmaster003
Great chapter I only wished it was the first chapter. Really enjoyed reading this and I liked how Mark got taken to the dragon realms. One word, awsome.
2swordmaster003Great chapter I only wished it was the first chapter. Really enjoyed reading this and I liked how Mark got taken to the dragon realms. One word, awsome.
6/29/2008 c13 swordmaster003
Excellent, I didn't know that Reven was actually pretending to be on the dark master's side. Excellent chapter no more words can describe this.
Excellent, I didn't know that Reven was actually pretending to be on the dark master's side. Excellent chapter no more words can describe this.
6/20/2008 c11 swordmaster003
Interesting, I like the tension of an impending battle. Nice work. I also like the evil plans for playing with Mark's emmotions. It was brillent.
Interesting, I like the tension of an impending battle. Nice work. I also like the evil plans for playing with Mark's emmotions. It was brillent.
6/20/2008 c10 swordmaster003
The powers you thought up for the dragon arm were very impressive. I also liked how you described the dream sequence. Also near the end I can begin to see that Mark and Yulie have growing relationship with each other now.
The powers you thought up for the dragon arm were very impressive. I also liked how you described the dream sequence. Also near the end I can begin to see that Mark and Yulie have growing relationship with each other now.
6/20/2008 c9 swordmaster003
Great chapter! I am left in awe as how well you described Mark's new power. Also the most interesting part is that there is some connection with Sedro, the dragon king and Falzar the dark master which I am looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.
Great chapter! I am left in awe as how well you described Mark's new power. Also the most interesting part is that there is some connection with Sedro, the dragon king and Falzar the dark master which I am looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.
6/20/2008 c8 swordmaster003
Great fighting sequence, it was a great improvement from the first fighting sequence. It was impressive how well you detailed the action in the chapter. Also I am getting excited since Mark is becoming even more connected with the dragon king.
Great fighting sequence, it was a great improvement from the first fighting sequence. It was impressive how well you detailed the action in the chapter. Also I am getting excited since Mark is becoming even more connected with the dragon king.
6/20/2008 c7 swordmaster003
I am really getting excited here, the tension from the dark side is making me want to read more. Great job with the flying sequence too; it was a fun transition to the following event.
I am really getting excited here, the tension from the dark side is making me want to read more. Great job with the flying sequence too; it was a fun transition to the following event.
6/20/2008 c6 swordmaster003
Wow, really nice chapter. Your descriptions of what was happening were amazing! I am very impressed by this chapter. I hope to see more like this. One last thing: mutton :).
Wow, really nice chapter. Your descriptions of what was happening were amazing! I am very impressed by this chapter. I hope to see more like this. One last thing: mutton :).
6/20/2008 c5 swordmaster003
Interesting that the dragon king is actually Mark's father. I like the new chacter Ansem too that you brought in to your story. I will be very interested in how he is used throughout your story.
Interesting that the dragon king is actually Mark's father. I like the new chacter Ansem too that you brought in to your story. I will be very interested in how he is used throughout your story.