for Lian's Tale2/15/2012 c3 
3the-far-east-half-blood
Love it! I've actually been looking for something like this!
I always felt that sao feng was a good guy!People need to write more stories like this...
I guess asking you to update soon won't work (hey, I wouldn't even if someone asked)...But if you do have the spare time...please do? I'd really appreciate it!
I love your story so much!
3the-far-east-half-bloodLove it! I've actually been looking for something like this!
I always felt that sao feng was a good guy!People need to write more stories like this...
I guess asking you to update soon won't work (hey, I wouldn't even if someone asked)...But if you do have the spare time...please do? I'd really appreciate it!
I love your story so much!
6/9/2010 c3 marie potter riddle
I love your story! Please, don't abandon it! It's really good! Can't wait to see Jack! Update soon! Please?
I love your story! Please, don't abandon it! It's really good! Can't wait to see Jack! Update soon! Please?
2/25/2009 c2 PocketParrot
wow i really love your fanfic Lian and Liam should totally get together when they are older! You do know bok choy is a vegetable right? well your in university so it would be weird if you didn't but i still thought it was a bit weird.
-Devon
wow i really love your fanfic Lian and Liam should totally get together when they are older! You do know bok choy is a vegetable right? well your in university so it would be weird if you didn't but i still thought it was a bit weird.
-Devon
6/10/2008 c1 1Sitka
Interesting story so far. The little girl kinda reminds me of the girl in Memoirs of a Geisha. I don't know if that's what you were aiming for, but still, it reminds me of her.
Well, I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
1SitkaInteresting story so far. The little girl kinda reminds me of the girl in Memoirs of a Geisha. I don't know if that's what you were aiming for, but still, it reminds me of her.
Well, I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
6/8/2008 c1 Aylaaa
I really love your story!
I really love your story!
4/17/2008 c1 2LarkaFrostfur
Groovy gravy, that was awesome! Loved it, can't wait to see the next chapter, and to see when Lian gets her revenge!mwa ha ha...cant wait, keep going.
Love Olivia X X X
2LarkaFrostfurGroovy gravy, that was awesome! Loved it, can't wait to see the next chapter, and to see when Lian gets her revenge!mwa ha ha...cant wait, keep going.
Love Olivia X X X
3/2/2008 c1 2StellarCat
I'm not too big on this chapter, though I can't rightly describe it. I think its because it feels a little crammed. Like you're trying to fit everything in at once in dialogue. A slightly drawn out argument I think would have been better with Sao Feng's telling off to Darmani.
Just my opinion. This could also be because I'm sick and haven't properly focused.
I do, however, want to see what becomes of this story.
ForgottenStars
2StellarCatI'm not too big on this chapter, though I can't rightly describe it. I think its because it feels a little crammed. Like you're trying to fit everything in at once in dialogue. A slightly drawn out argument I think would have been better with Sao Feng's telling off to Darmani.
Just my opinion. This could also be because I'm sick and haven't properly focused.
I do, however, want to see what becomes of this story.
ForgottenStars