for Pragmatic7/25/2021 c9 Cocofant
I'm soooooo sad this was abandoned, I really like this fic. Thank you so much for writing, you're a great writer.
I'm soooooo sad this was abandoned, I really like this fic. Thank you so much for writing, you're a great writer.
12/29/2019 c1 
18Hiniwalay
I normally dislike first-person POV fanfics, but I’ve got to say, you use it well! I’m hooked :D
18HiniwalayI normally dislike first-person POV fanfics, but I’ve got to say, you use it well! I’m hooked :D
4/25/2019 c9 the Honeycomb
So I found this on another author's favorite list and even though it hasn't been updated in forever I just wanted you to know that I really enjoy it! in the beginning your notes seemed kinda depressed but these last 3 chapters you were rather peppy! Hope you're doing well because people don't say that enough and mean it.
So I found this on another author's favorite list and even though it hasn't been updated in forever I just wanted you to know that I really enjoy it! in the beginning your notes seemed kinda depressed but these last 3 chapters you were rather peppy! Hope you're doing well because people don't say that enough and mean it.
4/4/2015 c9 2Totally Spazz-tastic
So... I just want to say I love this fic. Yay giant Lizard-Mai! Seriously, I have a major weakness for AU arranged marriage Zutara fics. They're just so fun! Anyway, thanks for the entertainment even if this fic never actually gets to the point where they marry.
2Totally Spazz-tasticSo... I just want to say I love this fic. Yay giant Lizard-Mai! Seriously, I have a major weakness for AU arranged marriage Zutara fics. They're just so fun! Anyway, thanks for the entertainment even if this fic never actually gets to the point where they marry.
5/17/2014 c9 7The Amazing Mumbo
Why does every story I read that hasn't been updated in forever end on a cliffhanger?!
I hope you plan to pick up this story again because I absolutely want the next chapter.
7The Amazing MumboWhy does every story I read that hasn't been updated in forever end on a cliffhanger?!
I hope you plan to pick up this story again because I absolutely want the next chapter.
2/20/2014 c9 Guest
Great story! Well written! Why haven't you finished it? Start up-dating it again!
Great story! Well written! Why haven't you finished it? Start up-dating it again!
4/29/2013 c9 storyoftheunknownfangirl
So since it's almost been another two years since your last update I think you owe us. Anyway I love the story and would love to see how everything works out!
So since it's almost been another two years since your last update I think you owe us. Anyway I love the story and would love to see how everything works out!
11/18/2012 c9 1Beloved Daughter
Great story so far! Especially am starting to really like Lady Ai. Iroh, of course, is an amazing character and my favorite in the story. Can't wait for more! :)
1Beloved DaughterGreat story so far! Especially am starting to really like Lady Ai. Iroh, of course, is an amazing character and my favorite in the story. Can't wait for more! :)
4/17/2012 c8 47Chaos Dragon
I have to say that it doesn't really sound like an ending to me. It's far too ominous to be an ending.
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47Chaos DragonI have to say that it doesn't really sound like an ending to me. It's far too ominous to be an ending.
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3/18/2012 c9 4Peachie-Trishie
I really love this story! And also I see you haven't updated in 2391274721874 years...-_-
please update soon!
4Peachie-TrishieI really love this story! And also I see you haven't updated in 2391274721874 years...-_-
please update soon!
3/3/2012 c9 5Padfootkicksbutt
aaaaaahhhhhh! AWESOME story! i am so full of suspense now! if sokka pops up soon, and toph comes too, my world would be complete (well almost, a horse and mustang convertible would be nice too...)
5Padfootkicksbuttaaaaaahhhhhh! AWESOME story! i am so full of suspense now! if sokka pops up soon, and toph comes too, my world would be complete (well almost, a horse and mustang convertible would be nice too...)
1/4/2012 c9 v son sayian
Good luck with grad school/finding a job. Hopefully you have an opportunity to write again, this fic is absolutely wonderful. I love how you've kept everyone very in character despite different circumstances and how you keep referencing certain things that do happen in the series. I'm very excited about the prospect of having drama without bashing and seeing how katara interacts with mai in the future. I'm waiting for zuko's massive freakout about the dagger and I'm excited for vistors come add to the drama (whether they're family or not). I was wondering if aang is going to appear at all later on or if he's just still disappeared/frozen in ice all this time.
Good luck with grad school/finding a job. Hopefully you have an opportunity to write again, this fic is absolutely wonderful. I love how you've kept everyone very in character despite different circumstances and how you keep referencing certain things that do happen in the series. I'm very excited about the prospect of having drama without bashing and seeing how katara interacts with mai in the future. I'm waiting for zuko's massive freakout about the dagger and I'm excited for vistors come add to the drama (whether they're family or not). I was wondering if aang is going to appear at all later on or if he's just still disappeared/frozen in ice all this time.
12/21/2011 c9 1Justice Balance
Seriously? You had to stop there? I'm new to the fandom but so far your fic has quickly turned me into an addict. I love your use of description, not to mention the lack of any galring/ noticeable grammatical errors. I hope you get the chance to update in the near future. You have a gift for writing and a knack for leaving your audience wanting more!
1Justice BalanceSeriously? You had to stop there? I'm new to the fandom but so far your fic has quickly turned me into an addict. I love your use of description, not to mention the lack of any galring/ noticeable grammatical errors. I hope you get the chance to update in the near future. You have a gift for writing and a knack for leaving your audience wanting more!