for Sighting of Fire10/30/2015 c1 Guest
The ones who said this story is pointless... irony, your comment is even MORE pointless. FACEPALM
The ones who said this story is pointless... irony, your comment is even MORE pointless. FACEPALM
1/27/2015 c1 Nightwing
Swag. Just totally swag.
Swag. Just totally swag.
4/22/2014 c1 ummy2020
) I miss Firestar I cried when he died() but Bramblestars a great leader with the best deputy EVER!)))
) I miss Firestar I cried when he died() but Bramblestars a great leader with the best deputy EVER!)))
11/17/2008 c1 
2Chainmail Fanatic
It says that in the book, what a pointless fan fiction!
(take that meanie!)
2Chainmail FanaticIt says that in the book, what a pointless fan fiction!
(take that meanie!)
10/13/2008 c1 6PolarIceWolf
WAY COOL! i've always wanted to know Bluestars real thouhghts on when she first meat Firestar!
6PolarIceWolfWAY COOL! i've always wanted to know Bluestars real thouhghts on when she first meat Firestar!
10/5/2008 c1 Leafcloud
Hey, isnt it you who had the noob poll "what gives off the impression of a noob" or something like that, on of the answers was short chapters, this chapter isnt very long is it?
Hey, isnt it you who had the noob poll "what gives off the impression of a noob" or something like that, on of the answers was short chapters, this chapter isnt very long is it?
3/5/2008 c1 1Jon Stewart
Very nice. You have a few small grammar and spelling mistakes, but definitely nothing that majorly hinders the flow. Besides, your grammar is multitudes better than most of that seen in some of this fandom's fics. I like this. I hate reviewing without at least a little concrit, but I really don't have anything major to correct. I'm definitely going to fave this.
1Jon StewartVery nice. You have a few small grammar and spelling mistakes, but definitely nothing that majorly hinders the flow. Besides, your grammar is multitudes better than most of that seen in some of this fandom's fics. I like this. I hate reviewing without at least a little concrit, but I really don't have anything major to correct. I'm definitely going to fave this.