
6/19/2009 c1 Anony
An interesting beginning, can't wait for the next chapter, please update!
An interesting beginning, can't wait for the next chapter, please update!
7/25/2008 c1 Kyra
Uhm, I don't really understand whats going on. Maybe you should explain at the end?
Uhm, I don't really understand whats going on. Maybe you should explain at the end?
5/10/2008 c1 BlackMoonWhite
Good start. A little short though, I want to know what happens next!
Good start. A little short though, I want to know what happens next!
5/2/2008 c1 Guest
interesting...
interesting...
4/14/2008 c1 000blank000
My my, what a promising beginning. Not much to tell for now, but i can't wait to see what's going to happen. See you soon, i hope ^_^
PS: Neuro owns my soul.
My my, what a promising beginning. Not much to tell for now, but i can't wait to see what's going to happen. See you soon, i hope ^_^
PS: Neuro owns my soul.
3/10/2008 c1
70Tashilovet
Short, but it has my attention. Very interesting and I hope to see more soon!

Short, but it has my attention. Very interesting and I hope to see more soon!
3/7/2008 c1 mercury589
I am a little bit confused about the story considering the summary for it. I can only assume that this is only chapter 1 and if that is the case then I am interested in seeing what you have in mind for the next chapter.
I am a little bit confused about the story considering the summary for it. I can only assume that this is only chapter 1 and if that is the case then I am interested in seeing what you have in mind for the next chapter.